Reviews for The Next Generation
AnuberosOPAsHeck chapter 1 . 5/30
First things first: I like the idea; there really aren't enough OC Spectrobes fan fictions out there.
However, the grammar is... sub-par. I could hardly understand what was going on!
For example:
Some speech marks were missed out, spellings were incorrect and the sentences ran on.
This has good potential, but to get widely accepted, you may want to revise your current chapters and 'brush up' on the errors.
Ashton Renna chapter 4 . 5/29
I see you like spectrobes well i like spectobs to their are very good creatures that can save nanaoiro system. i think that this story coud become as good as legends you just need to add more to do with the characters at the beginning and theryre cloths and there backgrounds, and also more to do with rallen and Jenna. good luck :)
mlegates1 chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
i like the story
JumperCable2 chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Try hitting enter every time a different character talks. Also, let us know which character it was who talked. I can't keep up with even this first chapter and I didn't even get to the actual spectrobes stuff yet.