Reviews for Family Photographs
Edhla chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Hey :) This is a very nice idea for a fic and I like the emotions that you were trying to convey. It's very dialogue-heavy, though, almost a script. Perhaps developing other areas of description, character etc might improve this a little? I also noticed a few syntax errors that a beta might be able to help you with. Best of luck x
Clizia chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
I love your story : it's very sweet and touching and I wish Ash had a future like this, with Eiji and their "family" :) Banana Fish is and will always be my favorite, most loved manga, so I'm happy to read new fics about Ash!