Reviews for Of Twisted Morals and Human Weaponry
Guest chapter 5 . 5/28
Honey I am reading so much into this and it is GOOD. All I can see is Merthur.
KingdomCome67 chapter 26 . 4/15
I can't believe I haven't found this story until now. I've read a lot of pics, but this is still one of my favourite!
KingdomCome67 chapter 19 . 4/15
Yes Arthur!
Ballerninja chapter 26 . 3/20
I just wanted to let you know that this was AMAZING... by far one of the best pieces of writing I've ever read. I found myself enjoying it, and it ended so perfectly! Great job, and I hope to some day read more!
Jamie McCrimmon chapter 26 . 2/27
This is possibly the sweetest Merlin & Arthur friendship fic I have read. I bloody loved it. The dialogue felt natural and the story flowed well. Rordan and Owyn are awesome OC's. You fleshed those characters out beautifully without taking away from the mains.

A lot of reveal fics don't usually have Arthur considering how poor a friend he had been compared to how Merlin had to him, and I rather liked that you included that angle. A lot of them tend to become a big monotonous string of Arthur asking "Merlin, why couldn't/didn't you trust me?" while you on the other hand included several facets for Merlin not previously telling creating a richer story.
Rababaz chapter 26 . 12/3/2016
Your story was just so great! I liked it!

Good job :)

Bisous xxx

Rab
1917farmgirl chapter 26 . 11/20/2016
This story was incredible! I know I should have reviewed chapter by chapter as I went, but it was too good and I had to keep reading. And now that it's done, I find myself rather speechless as I try to write you a review. But I to just want you to know that this was so amazing and so good. Thank you for sharing!
SilverCoatl chapter 26 . 11/6/2016
I absolutely love this story! Excellent grammar/spelling, and a really in-depth analysis of what might be going through each of the characters' heads at the time. The characterizations of Merlin and Arthur are a little different than in the show, but being locked in a dungeon for a month or two could certainly account for that. Well done!
Dreamz chapter 15 . 11/1/2016
Holy mother of exposition.

May I give a bit of constructive critisism?
There's way too much explanation and inner monologing in these chapters. You don't have to repeat things so often or explain who Merlin and Arthur are to each other. We all watched the tv show if we're reading fanfiction of it. We know, trust us. You don't have to tell us again through exposition. Nor do you have to interrupt dialogue with long paragraphs of what characters are thinking. Actions speak louder than inner monologues, my friend. We understand what that character is feeling without having to be told ;)
Sometimes the more impactful sentences are the ones that stand alone. They can speak louder and say more than long-winded thought processes.
Guest chapter 19 . 10/15/2016
As much as I love your story that's wrong...sorcerers are the people that choose to learn magic, Merlin and Morgana are examples of warlocks and witches. They are what you called sorcerers in this story.
Guest chapter 17 . 10/15/2016
Arthur is such a fucking idiot isn't he...all those hints and shit and he ignored Merlin?!
Guest chapter 16 . 10/15/2016
Actually Merlin is a warlock not a sorcerer but okay
Guest chapter 14 . 10/15/2016
I want to continue really I do...but I really really don't think I can take the anger anymore if that fucking hoe hurts Merlin again...

Tch never mind I can deal with it
Guest chapter 11 . 10/15/2016
That fucking bastard whipped Merlin again! If he was real...if he was ducking real...he'd be tortured 10 times over by now!
Guest chapter 9 . 10/15/2016
Holy fucking shit! C'mon Owyn!
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