Reviews for Shattered
BloodRageInferno chapter 1 . 9/13
Haha very sweet. Your gramma is still a little off and you use some odd phrases, but over all that was relatively well written and rather adorable! :) What is your first language?
whyamihereagain32 chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
Awh :) Cute!
SakuraFlowersFalling chapter 1 . 9/30/2012

you should write the lemon, instead of just making it so we all now it will happen.
shadow halfbreed chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
aaww, short and sweet :3
jellificentcore chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Short, but nice! I like how you described their feelings for eachother. :3
Candyland'sVirtue chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Ooooooooh A sleepover! I wanna come! ;D * grabs camcorder* OYEA TIME TO GET YUR SEXY ON!
Ehehehehe U I'm a normal person.
Awwww but this was really kawaii U Tehehehe!
Amy chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
That's sweet. :)
Chinumi chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
I love your story, it's so cute and we can only smile at the end. I hope that you'll write others stories like this, I'll read with pleasure
GeordiePenguin chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Great story! Especially if it was your first :D In my opinion it could have been a little longer, but there could be hope for second chapter or a sequel? :)

Great job! Keep it up.

GP x