|Reviews for Entwined Encounters|
| Wqeu chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
This was amazing You truly captured ho everyone felt in meeting Solaire
| Dantalion chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
First I need to say PRAISE the SUN!
Good chapter, and of course he stays behind to look at the sun.
| Bro chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Hey man! this was pretty good! You probably noticed the spelling errors ( I sure did) So those can go without mention, but the line "with a look of (Dran suspected) of love and longing" is kinda weird? For instance, it has two "of"s. Maybe a slight re-phrase to something like " He looked at the sun with a look of love and longing, or at least Dran suspected" or somesuch BUT Anyway, this was good! Yatta!