|Reviews for A Dance With the Dead|
| Morgan chapter 19 . 1/25
Thank you so much for writing such a lovely story. It has brought me a lot of joy. There are very few well-written Haunted Mansion fan-fictions, and this is my favorite amongst them. Lots of love.
| barthur0717 chapter 19 . 12/12/2016
| CCangel chapter 19 . 12/11/2016
This was such a rollercoaster. I have no idea where to start. Poor everybody except Ramsley. I have to give props to Sarah for not wanting Ramsley to basically commit suicide after everything he's done. He did not learn at all and because of his need to kill Elizabeth, he's gone for good.
I felt bad for Edward when Sarah and Jim reunited and the depth of his realization that he could never truly have her again was heartbreaking. Of course, the knowledge was always there for Edward but to see it materialize in front of him was just devastating. It would have been selfish of him to expect Sarah to just leave Jim to bite the dust. And the evening was supposed to go well. All Edward wanted to do was propose to Sarah/Elizabeth and spend the next few hours properly and they can't even do that. It just sucks to be them.
You really delved into Edward's psyche as well as Sarah's. I love how they fought for the other to live. They really are soulmates.
Then there's Jim, who is probably not grasping the situation in totality although he probably has a great suspicion of what happened to his wife over the weekend. I'm sure he has a million questions rolling around in his head given the interaction between Sarah and Edward. He was calm in a sense because so much was happening as they were trying to escape. I'm curious to read things from his POV when they get inside the mansion again.
All I know is that Sarah will never be the same again.
| Guest chapter 18 . 11/17/2016
IM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! Please update it soon. :D
| Guest chapter 18 . 11/6/2016
This is such a good twist! Does Elizabeth reunite completely with Edward?! Will Jim get his Sara back? Please continue to write!
| S chapter 18 . 11/5/2016
Yay! I'm glad you updated the story. This chapter was great!
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
i need edward n sarah together just as much as harry and hermione! LMAO
sexy sexy sexy
| Guest chapter 18 . 10/29/2016
sexy time sexy time
| CCangel chapter 18 . 10/5/2016
Where did Ramsley go? The fight was so well-written. I'm so glad Edward finally sees Ramsley for the monster he is.
| Z chapter 17 . 8/28/2016
hope you decide to update soon 3
| Indomptee chapter 17 . 8/12/2016
I don't very speak english (i'm French !)
But,I absolutely want to leave my review
So... l'm fall in love with your story. Haunted Mansion is my childhood movie. Mr. Gracey is so cute ! And I can't wait to read the next chapter !
Maybe, a day I could translate your Fanfic in French **
XXX - Indomptée
| EmilyLouisexx chapter 17 . 7/30/2016
Please update soon, this is amazing
| Guest chapter 17 . 6/21/2016
This is my favorite fanfiction ever! I'm ecstatic that you've returned!
| CCangel chapter 17 . 6/20/2016
I'm so glad you updated. I've been waiting for this. Edward is going to be heartbroken but Ramsley deserves every single punishment he has earned. However, I think something is about to happen to Sara. I saw that piece of foreshadowing. Please update soon.
| Guest chapter 17 . 6/18/2016
You currently hold the embodiment of my joy and happiness as you read this. It is your decision on whether or not it continues to exist or get hacked to death by the machete of Jason Vorhees and die. Please, if you would allow your heart to make room for a helpless socially awkward part t-rex fangirl- please lend ear to my plea... I need Edward and Sarah together... like.. TOGETHER together. Together as in Wade Wilson and that tight-ass spandex. I know you have announced you've gotten the rest of the story layer out on the canon table as feast for the rest of the fandom to devour mercilessly... but please, for the love of Krispe Kreme- what would Batman do?