Reviews for A Dance With the Dead
Lokidaughter13 chapter 16 . 11/16
NO! :'( Bad Sarah! You should NEVER plan to be with Jim, he's just a bad choice all around.
ccangel chapter 16 . 11/14
Ramsley has pissed off Sarah. I think he has met his match now. He needs to burn.
Guest chapter 15 . 11/11
Can you update the story? It really is fascinating. I need Sarah and Edward together _
Pyro-Misa chapter 15 . 10/19
What is this 'sleep" that you speak of? Lol the idea of something running (flying?) right through me is creepy. Keep up the great work! :-)
Eclipse000 chapter 14 . 10/7
Hello! Thanks for the update, I really enjoyed it:)) I wouldn't mind a bit of romance, but you see how it is best for your story:) All the best. Xxx
CCangel chapter 14 . 10/7
I love this chapter. It was so sweet that they got to dance.
Guest chapter 14 . 10/7
Personally I feel like if there is going to be a sexual scene it should be more towards the end of the story only because with Sarah, Jim and her kids are still part of the story (the former we can live without). Plus I feel like the idea of Ramsey in the house would be kind of creepy... Just my opinion, but if a more sensual scene is to appear soon then the effects of that should be seen (preferably from her kids because we haven't seen them in Lord knows how long).
Pyro-Misa chapter 14 . 10/7
I want to know what happens to Sarah's husband and kids. Didn't her husband make it to the mansion?
pokl chapter 13 . 10/4
just read through all of this is under an hour. I love this story so much and I'm sad to see it left un updated.
Lokidaughter13 chapter 13 . 9/21
Thank you for making this! I love this story so much but really, a cliffhanger on this secret mission?! I'm going to be thinking and trying to figure that out all day.
CCangel chapter 13 . 9/20
I hope Sarah's plan works. She has to play this smart but of course there is the issue of Jim being stuck wherever and if Ramsley gets suspicious then he will use Jim as collateral. I can't wait for the next one.
CCangel chapter 12 . 9/19
You really feel Edward's torment and confusion over the situation. It was funny to see that he cares nothing about Jim and he's like screw the husband, this woman is mine. I did like the fact that he would leave Sarah's children the house and everything that comes with his inheritance.
Lokidaughter13 chapter 10 . 9/18
And if she doesn't to with him I will! I happily volunteer as tribute! (For chapter 12)
Lokidaughter13 chapter 12 . 9/18
Omg! That was me! Sorry I forgot to log in last time.
Guest chapter 11 . 9/15
Okay, Jim's dead. Sarah can be with Mr. Gracey now!
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