Reviews for Find Me
torexile chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
A good story. Nice letting 'find me' return. It makes sense.

Two small notes:
'Sherpard' ..Shepard
'had been abandon' ..had been abandoned
MatCat chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Good start, hope you keep writing.
the kungfucow chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
love it thank you for writing a much better ending and i hope he finds miri
maria chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
I really like this, please continues writing, it's a nice introduction
commandocucumber chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
this opening was fantastic and i want to read more!
bluemarlin chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Good start to a story. Please continue.