Reviews for Faked Sunlight
MarcelineFan chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
I think Edgar Allan Poe would be proud.
LadySilvermist chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Me: I loved this, but it seems Nny has no comment, he wandered off into the other room.
Nny: *pops his head into the kitchen* What?
Me: Nothing! Grimdark Pony nonsense!
Nny: STILL?! Damnit, Silver...
Y. Honey chapter 1 . 9/24/2012

Well, for starters, I'm impressed by your narrative skills. I like the way you describe your scenes and what the character does, it's descriptive enough and in this particular scenario it managed to be chilly and suspenseful.

I don't think the rating needs to be changed, the language is K, but the content I feel does push it to T.

The ending is particularly great, in my opinion. This is a good story, good job!
Anon chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
For a fic with a pretty common plot premise (pony goes insane, lures unsuspecting victims to a bloody end) this shows a glimmer of actual literary competence shining through the cliche. 7/10, 8/10 considering how utterly shite most similar fics are.
MistyxKisame chapter 1 . 9/19/2012