Reviews for Ship of the Line: An Unlikely Hope
Dracco chapter 5 . 7/24/2013
Awesome, noce to see you writing this again. Here's to the next chapter being out soon:)
oddhack chapter 5 . 7/24/2013
This is quite fun. Two comments:

- Xander might get better reactions from people if he changed clothes, even if only by changing robe color, and perhaps restyled his helmet.

- No matter how many NDAs you have, if you put a quarter of a million soldiers in deep space, their families are going to demand answers to where they are. Disclosure is going to have to happen sooner rather than later, or governments will fall.
The DCG chapter 5 . 7/24/2013
With Xan and willow going away buff's going to need some more support. Had the odd idea of Hammond helping. At lest for advice, given how cut off buffy is from most family. A little subbed in granddad/miltary support/advice would do a world of good.
flan bridge chapter 5 . 7/24/2013
Yeah I think a cosmetic alteration of the suit would have been one of the first things done.
black panter chapter 4 . 7/14/2013
i love the story,
would also love to see the next chapter.
how would the be fighting the goould?
Mortimer Grimm chapter 4 . 4/4/2013
Good work! Another chapter, please?
Guest chapter 4 . 3/16/2013
Go DAM NIT! You're a freaking shinies author! And I don't have anything to redirect your short attention span back to this story.
irezel chapter 4 . 3/1/2013
woooohoo! this is interesting...are you gonna continue it?
thunder18 chapter 4 . 2/15/2013
Great chapter Update soon
Zenoen-the-mac-user chapter 4 . 2/13/2013
disappointing that there is not mire to read a very interesting story
Guest chapter 4 . 2/10/2013
damn good story looking forward to more :)
happyhooligan2001 chapter 4 . 1/18/2013
Having Willow on board should be a force multiplier. A witch should be equal to a Jedi. The new technology should be nice except for the stormtrooper armor. If a teddy bear with a stick can kick your ass then your armor is useless. Get rid of it.
happyhooligan2001 chapter 3 . 1/18/2013
Looks like Xander is already channeling some Vader trying to make him out to be not all bad. Of course everybody is the hero of their own story. Hitler thought he was a good guy, so did Robespierre, Lenin, Stalin, Pol Pot, Mao. Of course some innocent people had to suffer for the greater good. I'm not sure i would want to trust this guy with this much power. And his manpower demands are insane. The U.S. Air Force presently has only about 350,000 active duty personnel. The entire armed forces of the United States has about 1,500,000. That's a pretty large chunk of the population for a top secret project. And with that many people involved there's no way to keep it secret.
happyhooligan2001 chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
I'm sure the Executor would be a nice addition to Stargate Command. I would be a bit worried about Xander having some more Darth Vader relapses.
happyhooligan2001 chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
So Darth Xander has control of a star destroyer but only during Halloween? I wonder who the storm troopers are. Other people in the area dressed as storm troopers? Time to read on.
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