|Reviews for Offbeat|
| LaSpia chapter 19 . 12/5/2013
Fantastic story. Love EPOV and his perspective on Bella. She really gets him, and it intersting to hear his inner dialogue when shes either upset or pushing him to be better. So well-written, really has a feel like they are on patrol, with both the horrible and humorous aspects of that day-to-day job.
Love it and thank you for all this hard work. It shows!
| Cockerspanmom chapter 19 . 12/5/2013
Some women are tougher than some men. And way scarier sometime.
| DawnsWhimsy chapter 19 . 12/5/2013
Poor Edward he just doesn't get it sometimes.
| divyvicki chapter 19 . 12/5/2013
So great to hear from u again. Hope u r feeling better.
| Judyblue95 chapter 19 . 12/4/2013
Thanks for your suggestion to go back and read chapters 17 and 18 again. I did and it was helpful bringing me back into the rhythm of the story. I like the way Edward and Charlie seem to be bonding over Bella and over both being cops...Bella's pretty observant when it comes to Edward's family and his relationship, of lack thereof, with them. I think she was spot on. Love the bit of humor at the end with the jokes about Edward being beaten up by a lesbian. I am so glad you are finishing this story. I have liked it a lot all along...
| Denny52 chapter 19 . 12/4/2013
Glad to be able to read this again. Edward is pretty funny and a solid guy. I loved how he treated that domestic dispute. He was right on. Good chapter.
| laylieb chapter 19 . 12/4/2013
Ahhh! So glad you updated! Great chapter!
| robinsonmr chapter 19 . 12/4/2013
it was worth the wait, I love these two together, and I think it was funny Charlie's and Edwards interactions. great chapter and glad you are back with this story.
| jimemon chapter 19 . 12/4/2013
Great chapter :)
| mnnlisa chapter 19 . 12/4/2013
Kind of forgot about this story, so I refreshed my memory and am glad to see it updated. Particularly enjoy the lighter side of things. And the talk of family ... hope for the future.
| Oldenuf2knobeta chapter 19 . 12/4/2013
Soooooo happy you're back.
Love this Edward and Bella. They are wonderfully flawed and quirky...yet very believable and authentic.
Can't wait for more. Don't you hate that ? No sooner do you deliver one chapter, they ask for another.
| crackupmonkey chapter 19 . 12/4/2013
So glad to see another chapter. I think we are bothered more by our parents than others.
| Twihardder chapter 19 . 12/4/2013
Oh how I've missed this story! Are there other reasons why Bella became upset with Edward concerning his family? Seems just a little harsh...unless maybe she thinks he doesn't want to go further in the relationship?
McCarty cracks me up. Truly hope he doesn't try to play hero one too many times.
Great update, thanks!
| MDtwiwriter chapter 19 . 12/4/2013
Not that I ever thought about being a police officer but this story just confirmed that you have to have a whole other set of skille to do that job. There have been ten in my family, some now retired thank God. Thanks for updating.
| dr.meow1234 chapter 19 . 12/4/2013
I'm still with ya