Reviews for Offbeat
sami69 chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
Great chapter love it! :o)
distractedgirl25 chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
lol...OCD porn lovin' Bella, how can Edward not want that! I'm lovin' and laughin' right through this chapter! Thanks for that and the update.
debslmac chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
haylee21 chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
that was great...i love you as an author...your characters always rock
edwardsouthernbella chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
I like how crazy Bella and Alice are b/c that is what makes them interesting. And I want Copward to be w/ Bella. Thanks! XXOO
jimemon chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
Loved it!
ohtobeyoung chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
Hope he doesn't listen to Rose and really don't like him with Tanya. Our judicial system is so screwed. Punishment should befit the crime. Steal? Off with a hand. Rape? Off with something they'll miss.
journeyedgrl chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
He better not fuck Tanya
scrosby66 chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
Great chapter...I am liking kooky Bella and Alice...thanks for writing!
SassyKassie chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
Whoa! Rosalie's pregnant AND with Emmett!?

I think Alice is cute! Bella is a little... quirky. But I think she would be good for Edward, I hope he doesn't hook up with Tanya :/ lol
Cared chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
Alice and Bella are even more kookie that at first appearance but I like them.
Isao84 chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
Crazy but cute..

Feels more real less fairytale like...i like it...
Marie One chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
Edward need to report to his SGT. Rosalie is pregnant or she needs to take care of it. She could get hurt on the streets in a way and never have another kid. Looking forward to the date and thanks for the update.
Flavia Ribeiro chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
Love it! Hope he didn't bang tania! Love bella and alice!
MamaJoyof3 chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
I like the relationship between Rose and Edward.
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