Reviews for Offbeat
Shannon Susan32 chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
Sooooo good! I can't wait til the next update.
ropeandjimmy chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
Lexi - I can definitely see that this seems different from your other fictions. I like the fact that Edward is not taken with Bella. Yeah, when Alice is trying to give him details with regard to who Bella is, it's rather funny how he is trying to seem interested, but deep down really seems to be only listening to pass the time. I suppose someone who is OCD can come off as more than a little strange. It's almost as if she is OCD with no verbal filter. LOL It does seem a little odd for someone to point out a scuff mark on his shoe and then bringing to his attention that he had not shaved. Okay then. However, on the other hand I'm not sure what is up with Alice? I mean who mentions a person's interest in Porn in general conversation. Yep, these two seem a little kooky.

I really like this story, and I made a promise to myself that I would read and review as each chapter is posted. Not going to read beginning, skip middle and then pick up towards the end like I did with WTS. JS
MinaRivera chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
Does Bella has Aspergers, or at least in that spectrum? It seems to be the case. So Rose is pregnant, I bet Emmett will choke when he finds out!
Thanks for the update, Lexi!
xoox
Mina
WardLover TwiFan chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
He's not going to back out of the dinner I hope. Rose doesn't have room to be commenting on Edward's interaction with a victim when she's pregnant with her partner's baby. I don't think she's trying to be mean or anything. She seems to just be looking out for his well-being.

-Monique
fallingsnow87 chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
Sounds good to me! Anything you write I approve! :)
kimjhill chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
a weird obsessed bella...hmmmmmm very interesting !
motherbeatrice chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
awesome, more please!
aka AddictedToFic chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
I like that Bella is strange. I want to learn more about her
avidreader69 chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
What a Chapter 1! Talk about attention getting...
sassygirl156 chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
There was so much going on here I don't know where to start. Emmett and Rosalie are doing the deed and now she's pregnant? That will seriously mess up their ability to be partners. As in maybe getting one of them hurt.

Edward and Skankya (oops, Tanya)-blech. No big surprise there, but he needs some sort of female companionship, I guess. Bella's in no headspace for that. No matter how hot she thinks he is!

I don't for a minute imagine James is out of the picture for good. It can't be that easy.

Gotta love both Jasper and Alice, tho; at least that will be a good match.
Twi-Mom12292005 chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
WOW, that was alot to take in a little bit of a chapter. Rose is preggers, but doesnt know what she wants to do. Edward likes Bella but is skeptical about getting to know her, while bella has a crush on edward. and Alice well alice is just alice. great job doll cant wait for more.
edwardsouthernbella chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
PLEASE make this a full length fic, my dear! I am so enthralled with this Edward, and this is my kind of story. AMAZING!
megawill chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Please continue it, loved it!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
I'd love to see this as a full length fic, I just love the way you write NYC and these characters.
FutureMrsBCullen chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Love it totally different direction from Quite Storm ... excited for more :0)
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