|Reviews for Offbeat|
| lesocialbutterfly chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Never mind wet willies, that fucker James gave me the willies. *creep* I need a hero is on repeat in my mind right now. Shriek style even lol
| Starnani21 chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
I really like the pace you set. While I do enjoy following the story of someone learning to fix themself after escaping a dark/traumatic event, It doesn't seem like that is what you've started here. Is this about Edward saving Bella? balancing the call of duty and the pull of personal connection? You introduced a lot in this initial chapter- glimpses into character back grounds, hints of some dynamic personalities and individual motivations mingling in a not very typical work environment...
You are without a doubt one of my favorite writers to follow. However long or short you make this tale, I'll be reading it.
What is the deal with Bella? If she is so closed off, why move to NYC?
| KeeWit chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Love it. Of course.
| cherryhilz chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Interesting start! Would love to read more!
| we live for love chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
I am loving this story so far. I can't wait to read more.
| OperaGurl04 chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Love it! As I love all your others. I think you could definitely expand this into a full-length fic. Just because you had a lot of action right away doesn't mean you can't take it anywhere else... Bella could have side-effects that worsen her OCD, Emmett and Rosalie could fall for each other after a shoot-out, Edward will had to get over his man-whore ways... there's so much you can do from here! Hope you'll continue it!
| angels04 chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Love it already. Definately a full fic, I can see many sub story lines here.
| sassygirl156 chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Definitely worth elongating! Maybe a ficlet, probably not full-length, two shot wouldn't be enough. I'm gonna follow it, so whatever you decide, I'm here to read it!
| dA-mama23434 chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Another amazing fic by my FAVORITE author! I'd definitely become invested/ engrossed if this became a full-length SexiLexi story! Xoxo
| shawnd chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
I think this could be a good story. Hope you continue it. Make it a full-length fic. You already have introduced most of the characters in the story. Can't wait to see what you plan to do with the story.
| hulamom chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
A full length fic please!
| cbmtmorris chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Damm Lexi, you are creative, and I certainly hope that you continue this into full length fic. I like the style of writing in this fic-short, blunt and to the point. I have to agree with another reviewer, an OCD Bella would be very interesting to read. I look forward to more, and I am sure this fiction will be as all of your other stories have been-amazing.
| smooch119 chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
I really enjoyed it, thank you! Different for you, writing wise. You drew the reader in during the set-up and you kind of get an understanding of Officer Cullen.
| sujari6 chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Great start. Certainly worth continuing with.
| dana2928 chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Full length fic but not a ton of chapters :)