|Reviews for Offbeat|
| archy12 chapter 5 . 3/10
Seems Jacob giving Bella his number gave Edward heartburn...
| archy12 chapter 4 . 3/10
and Jasper didn't waste any time!
Edward is pretty it only because of his father?Anyway,Bella might have the right key.
| archy12 chapter 3 . 3/10
Oh,so Edward majored in takes some doing!But he likes to be a cop-that's fine.I wish he wouldn't think so low of himself though.
Hope he has a better time with Bella than he had with Tanya.:)
| archy12 chapter 2 . 3/10
Fifteen years?That's Edward thinks Bella is out of his ?I mean,he thinks she is a little nuts-I get that,but why out of his league?
Rose has to tell Emmett,of 's not something she can Emmett will take it positively.
| JoJo757 chapter 20 . 3/10
I was wondering where you were! Edward has some major issues, but I love him. He needs to express himself. Maybe in other ways than punching his father. I get that his father has hurt him time and again and that Bella should respect his wishes about not wanting Charlie to his family. But, if he doesn't actually talk to her about how he really feels...as in his feeling scared that Charlie would take her away from him or whatever, then that's what he needs to do. Going and punching his father out at the bar is only going to create chaos within his family. I'm interested in seeing how the next chapter plays out.
| JoJo Sky chapter 20 . 3/10
| archy12 chapter 1 . 3/10
I have been meaning to read this one for some time now,and today I saw Chapter-20 had been posted and said-Come on,read it already! Nice action,and of course very well-written, I caught it!
| malleelee chapter 9 . 3/10
Fun. Loved the little girls and Edward's mother. What is with Edward? Bella had to work hard using jealousy, threats, and physical enticements. Well, we will see how Edward feels in the morning.
| banshee69 chapter 20 . 3/10
I was glad to see this one updated. This chapter had me encompassed the entire time reading. I feel for Edward. I have a feeling things will get worse before they get better.
| irishnlove2shop chapter 20 . 3/9
Awesome. Loved it.
| prettymomma128 chapter 20 . 3/9
I missed this story. Thanks for the update. Great chapter!
| divyvicki chapter 20 . 3/9
So great to get an update on this wonderful story.
| sarahmichellew chapter 20 . 3/9
Thank you for the update! Sounds like trouble brewing for Edward. Your a wonderful writer, your stories make me feel I'm right there.
| nana723 chapter 20 . 3/9
Great Chapter . I love this story. Cant wait for the next update.
| alc1002 chapter 20 . 3/9