Reviews for Offbeat
LAB1 chapter 20 . 6/28/2014
I'm enjoying your story and love your Bella! I love how she says it like it is!
trbhasspkn chapter 4 . 6/4/2014
The pajamas and her severely lacking social manners are off putting...
trbhasspkn chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
Love it!
Guest chapter 20 . 5/30/2014
Bella needs to kmind her own business. He went through it not her. She pisses me off.
Cina's chapter 20 . 5/25/2014
Such a great story... Went back and started from the beginning.
Robda chapter 20 . 5/18/2014
Just finished hard days night and loved it , came back to check on this one cause I live this as well and cop Edward is hot but it's still on this chapter , hope you don't forget about this story cause I really enjoy reading it
Guest chapter 20 . 5/13/2014
Loving this story. Keep the chapters coming!
prrrincess chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
Wish all cops were like Jasper here. Then my faith in them would be restored.
Guest chapter 20 . 4/30/2014
Love this story so far. Love Edward's POV. Real and not cornily melodramatic. Just nice pacing.
Camilla10 chapter 20 . 4/26/2014
He has to rid himself of his demons.
Camilla10 chapter 6 . 4/25/2014
Not exactly an ideal family ... poor Edward
Camilla10 chapter 2 . 4/25/2014
Ha ha no ficlet, this one. I like it. You marked it AU but I suppose it's amistake and it is all huma. Right?
reesessweetie chapter 20 . 4/21/2014
this story is sooo goood! i love that you're not afraid to write about a bella who's a little different. this edward, he's been through so much as well. i wonder if carlisle really is changed for good, or if he will disappoint them again. i'm a little wary of the friendship between carlisle and charlie, though. i guess we'll just have to wait and see
lemonbutt chapter 20 . 4/15/2014
Well damn, Edward.

Jasper cracked me up with his story.
iShini chapter 20 . 4/8/2014
I haven't reviewed a story in a while haha. Anyways I finished your sequel to instructions not included the other day and I really like your writing style so I wanted to read more of your stuff so here I am! This story is really great. I know Bella doesn't have full blown autism but its interesting to see a story with someone whose on the spectrum. I have little relatives that have autism and this story is just pretty relatable.

When they were at the bar waiting for the game to finish I just felt like Charlie was going to get hurt or something but he didnt do woohoo!

I don't really know what to expect for the upcoming chapter but I just hope it makes me happy haha. And I see you've been working on this story for quite a while, so good luck with finishing! This is gonna be my first time reviewing your stories as the chapters come out. I've read your Greys anatomy/twilight story and that one is still my fav. So yeah, can't wait for the next chapter.
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