if this story has Fishlegs/Ruffnut, I will be so happy. it's one of my guilty ships.

When people are speaking, you show it like this: "Thank you for nothing, you useless reptile."

Great ending, absolutely loved the story!

Like how Snotlout wises up (at least as much as he can)

Like the Ruffnut and Fishlegs angle

Awesome battle scene

Nice twist to get it back to the movie scenes

WOW! I wished this had happened, Hiccup was so close in the ring. He really just needed his dad to not be there or Astrid to stop his dad.

I like how you changed both of their motivation in the ring. Loved how Hiccup stopped her with a hug :) Like Astrid's plan a lot

So glad Hiccup explained everything to her, she took it so well, kinda surprising. Like how they bonded over it.

Hiccup and Toothless are such great friends, awww. The sketch book thing was so sweet too and I loved Astrid's character growth at the end. She is right, people on sidelines often see better

Loved the honest conversation between Astrid and Hiccup, at last the truth about feelings is revealed. Like the part with the terror too, nice build up and groundwork

Astrid's parents are a smart bunch, so awesome! Astrid's mom gave great love advice and Astrid's dad is so smart about the dragon war.

Loved Hiccup is this chapter, so caring and awkward. Glad he admitted he still loves Astrid

Like how Ruffnut has a skill, nice character development