Reviews for The Choice
le.pechi chapter 30 . 1/17/2015
cute! I love this story!
keep writing (whatever you're writing, just keep doing it) !
Guest chapter 2 . 1/5/2015
You are very good at speaking English considering it's not your first language. This story is written better than a few other fanfictions I've read. Great job!
Warrof chapter 30 . 1/4/2015
"The old Viking fallback. Nice and Simple!" :) Generally some of the best stories I've read are that way, Yours ranks up there! Though technically you should have been using double quotes " for speaking. (Sorry, my English Teacher mom turned me into a grammar Nazi)
Dragonbow117 chapter 4 . 1/3/2015
I think this is my 8th time reading over this...
I literally JUST got the Godfather reference...
DoomforFrank chapter 30 . 12/30/2014
I think you managed quite a feat here. The story was well paced, depth of character was frequently explored with only minor OOC (mostly just Snotlout), and it was all done with good grammar and spelling!

It was great reading a hiccstrid tale that still included the gang. Hiccup and Astrid are so sweet to read about, but so much of their development relies on, and is interestingly viewed by, their surrounding cast. Your development of the relationship between Ruffnut and Fishlegs was well handled and a touching secondary story. And Tuffnut is just hilarious when done right. Thank you for writing such a great piece of work.
AlphaMiner64 chapter 30 . 12/30/2014
Wow... just... just wow... I don't know what to say... just... wow...
Karel chapter 30 . 12/20/2014
Wow! I discovered this fiction in french first and I so like it. I'm very impress of your writing style and your story respects almost all of the true events of the movie! Congratulation!
Starlite Moon chapter 30 . 12/14/2014
Wow. Just wow. That was worse than the fault in our stars! At least for that book I didn't... get cold. Wow! Just wow! You are super good at writing! I am not even joking! And I read a LOT so I know a good writer when I see one. That story was A. M. A. Z. I. N. G! You better either be writing another story or start writing another one, cause otherwise it is a complete and utter waist of talent!
D0ntCar3 chapter 30 . 12/11/2014
This. Was. Awesome.
AlexisJames chapter 30 . 11/27/2014
This story was amazing. It was recommended, I guess, for lack of a better word, by Midoriko-sama. I loved how the story built. It was really good. Look forward to reading more of your works! Thanks for taking the time to write and post this story.
MashiroAzuki chapter 30 . 11/26/2014
Well! This has been a very interesting read. I hope you write more fanfiction for Hiccup and Astrid since it's very hard to find a good one nowadays. Thank you very much for the story and don't forget to write more :)
MashiroAzuki chapter 14 . 11/26/2014
Finally! Astrid finally realizes how awesome and thoughtful Hiccup really is! I am so glad...
MashiroAzuki chapter 10 . 11/26/2014
What kind of tradition is this? Watching the newly weds have sex? Seriously? Thank god this is only a fanfiction 'cause I don't think Vikings are that bold...
MashiroAzuki chapter 6 . 11/26/2014
Suddenly, I hope Ruffnut doesn't fall for Fishlegs or vice versa. That would be so...disgusting. Anyhow, great story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
Gwelle chapter 30 . 11/23/2014
Hello! It was a beautiful story. Thank you very much!
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