Reviews for The Choice |
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![]() ![]() Llegue a este fic por medio de otro, suertuda yo. Realmente disfrute leyendo tu trabajo, mis felicitaciones. espreo volver a leerte pronto / I came to this fic through another, lucky me. I really enjoyed reading your work, my congratulations. I hope to read you again soon |
![]() ![]() Hi, I really enjoyed this fic from start to finish. nice writing, congratulations |
![]() ![]() ![]() Noooooo I this story I’m sad that it has ended |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not sure why, but this story reminds me a lot of Earn It by MidWestMexican. it's not identical, and I'm not saying you stole it, but it's very similar. Astrid's dad being in a wheelchair, the talk in the forest, even hiccup faking the comsumnation. In that story she was a lot meaner though, and Hiccup faked it with paint instead of cutting himself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not sure why, but this story reminds me a lot of Earn It by MidWestMexican. it's not identical, and I'm not saying you stole it, but it's very similar. Astrid's dad being in a wheelchair, the talk in the forest, even hiccup faking the comsumnation. In that story she was a lot meaner though, and Hiccup faked it with paint instead of cutting himself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow .I love the drama and tensions on this chapter...that astrid scene in the last part is nice giving her some key moments... |
![]() ![]() Second or third time that I've read this and it still bears reading. Perhaps someday you would consider doing a sequel? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is fantastic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adorable and fantastic chapter... |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes .I'm loving where this is going... |
![]() ![]() ![]() well... hiccup confessed...the dialogue sometimes is confusing...it mix with the narrative part...anyway, it's good there's always a development on every chapter... |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn.. astrid is confuse..lol.. and hiccup is great In his chapter...very nice... |
![]() ![]() ![]() tsundere astrid...and sneaky and caring hiccup...it's a progress very nice... |
![]() ![]() ![]() this chapter is hilarious |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor astrid.. |