Reviews for The Choice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I do think it would be a good idea to have Toothless as a big part of this story, the suspense of 'will Astrid find Toothless before she does in the movie' is very interesting. Anyway, great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bet he left a little too early, huh? Nice Chapter Ja ne Jim |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, I like the backstory for Astrid and Hiccup's families. And I like the idea that Hiccup really only causes trouble because he's trying to hard to compensate for his size. Nice chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really cool! Update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once again, good chapter. Not your first language, huh? Well, you're doing good so far. I liked that you included the backstory for WHY Astrid hates dragons. See, the movie doesn't give any hint at her motivations at all. Maybe it's just her personality, the way she is, but I would have liked to have found out more from the film. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope Hiccup still bonds with Toothless. Nice one LFTM Ja ne Jim |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it so far! Please keep updating. I would love to see how this story pans out. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting start! And very nicely written. I'm excited to see where this goes. |