Reviews for The Choice
Guest chapter 27 . 2/26/2017
Guest chapter 4 . 2/25/2017
hahahaha now thats funny
Carl Solo chapter 29 . 1/20/2017
This was a great story thanks.
weesh chapter 30 . 1/18/2017
This was soooooo good! Wow. Great concept and delivery. I felt so bad for them both when they first got married because they weren't talking and neither of them knew how awesome they could eventually be together. The tweaking of the movie plot to include their marriage was really well done. It was fun to get different points of view and explore more of the characters too. I like ruffnut and fishlegs together. I really enjoyed reading this and hope you know you did a great job writing it!
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 30 . 1/16/2017
mmm 6/10 better score than others
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 27 . 1/16/2017
not bad twister here and there
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 23 . 1/16/2017
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 22 . 1/16/2017
much better romance woohoo
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 20 . 1/16/2017
getting a little more better
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 18 . 1/16/2017
ok i liked that part
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 17 . 1/16/2017
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 16 . 1/16/2017
shes idiot at first second she barely talked to him third she stills show anger all bad for newly wed couple
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 14 . 1/16/2017
where is the intense adventure ? since there is no love scenes then there have to be a in adventure and for crying out loud they can kissed they are husband and wife not boyfriend and girlfriend kissing but married couple hopefully they actually do that
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 13 . 1/15/2017
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 12 . 1/15/2017
will you write another story similar to this but with a twister and a sex scene ?(just one or two it dont have to be intense )
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