Reviews for Happily Ever After?
NewfieLady chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Great story
ladybugsmomma chapter 3 . 12/8/2012
Skinner is good about saving them. Keep up the great work!
phnxgrl chapter 3 . 12/8/2012
Interesting chapter. I loved how their old boss was keeping tabs on them. Please continue.
RhizOneill chapter 2 . 11/19/2012
Great chapter!
ladybugsmomma chapter 2 . 11/15/2012
Knowing them, they will eventually make a stand to fight. Great chapter! Keep up the great work!
phnxgrl chapter 2 . 11/15/2012
Great Chapter Mulder and Scully plus their kids on the run. Please continue.
ladybugsmomma chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Great start! I hope to read more!
Vadergirl2006 chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
omg omg i love it so far!
so kiss me goodbye chapter 1 . 9/19/2012

Sounds like someone doesn't want our FBI heroes to live in domestic bliss - it's always fun to see the inventive things writers can come up with to upset life for Mulder and Scully. :) Would love to see what you've got planned.

One suggestion? I commonly read the recommendation to start every new speaker on a new paragraph. There might be other reasons for it, but the main one (I think) is to make things easier to read. I always reckon the easier something is to read, the more people you get reading your stories. (- not a fact as far as I know :D just a hunch)

Good luck with the rest of your story.