|Reviews for A Bit of Understanding|
| Azii chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
"Misguided fingers, confused words, befuddled heads…"
See what I mean that you have an uncanny ability to convey a great deal of depth with economy of expression? These six words speak to so many things: hesitation, awkwardness (on the part of Akari probably), discomfort, a touch of the forbidden co-worker relationship even? You may not have meant to suggest any of these things, or anything at all beyond these six words, but good writing hints at that which lingers beyond the limits of prose. You do that like a pro. It means that your stories can speak to readers in a multiplicity of ways. And it's not easy.
Thanks again for this. It was lovely.
| nightfayte chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
Nice job! I really liked this story of yours!
Thanks for the great read!