|Reviews for No Man's Land|
| dollegirl chapter 1 . 7/16
It's official. I'm getting NOTHING done today. And good gad almighty you probably aren't either! I'm mourning the end of BOH Em/Ed pairings for today. DOLLEMO.
Ok, besides picturing Edward in tennis shorts and his grunting swings, I loved Emmett's vulnerability here. LOVE IT. He's always kind of this confident guy and you can see it here with what he does and how he takes care of his boy, but then there's this little crack that eventually splinters. Edward didn't treat him any differently and continued on with comfort and trust. Imagining his eyes closed with a big grin when Emmett asked if he was asleep almost split my face with one of my own.
This was kind of like the UST icing on the tennis boy shorts cake. Because up until that grinny face with closed eyes I had to turn up my fan a little. Will he? Won't he? OMG EMMETT DEW EET!
| Trip chapter 1 . 7/13
Nothing like a re-read to finish of the Wimbledon season!
| JustTheSlashMaam chapter 1 . 7/10
| SagaDevotee chapter 1 . 6/17
damn! that was HAWT!
and I love the vulnerability and romance too.
| SilverAnemone13 chapter 1 . 5/30
I typically never review on one-shots, just because it's too short to be invested in. But I had to give you props for doing something so out of the ordinary. I've never read a story where a straight guy has been so open minded so quickly without it being a one time thing. You know, "a mouth is a mouth" or "I'm just experimenting." He actually cares about Emmett and isn't shy about admitting it to himself and to Emmett.
"Gay for you" is always hard to pull off without it seeming like the cheesiest romance ever. It doesn't have to be grand or you're-my-soulmate, it just has to be genuine.
I would LOVE to see how Edward would deal with 'coming out' to his family and friends and the world, when he's not actually gay but in love with Emmett. If he's image-obsessed, he might have no problem coming out to family and friends but apprehensive about his fans and the world in
general. Gah! I wish this was more than a one-shot!
You're awesome, I love your work!
Love from Denmark.
| silton chapter 1 . 8/26/2014
Ummmm - yeah...I just read this AT WORK!
Gah - I need to go for a walk or something, I have a lot of ummmm, pent up enery, yeah, thats it, energy...
XO - Sil
| BarbyBells chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
a fuck-hot slash! i love it!
| Uki96 chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
Really liked this story! Edward and Emmett are so hot together!
Plus the massage thing is really well written and it was a turn on!
Well i hope there will be more Emmett/Edward story like that!
| Judyblue95 chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
Loved this! Edward and Emmett are so f*cking hot together! More, please!
| ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
That was hot as well as sweet. Emmett was so vulnerable. I worried when Edward wasn't hard when Emmett tried to give the towel back after massaging his glutes. However, suddenly things changed . . . yay! I loved how Edward said near the end, he's interested, and that he didn't say no. Thankfully. I don't think Emmett could've handled that after. That crack at the end about London and Rio, was a great way to end it. Loved it!
| Spamula69 chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
That was so hot! I got my porn and now I am all a tither.
Well done, Enjoyed it!
| christylou chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
thanks for the story.
| Dee9274 chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
| FeyLadyGrey chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Wow! I would love to see this continued!
| Pates Greeneyes chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Now that is what I call balls being thrusted back and forth. :) and by balls i mean emotions. Emm's emotions and nerves about Edwards health and his feelings for him had him in quite a turmoil. And he didnt want to lose his best friend because of his attraction to him. Yet, he couldn't fight it any longer. And GD! I'm glad he didn't! That was hot! But Emm's uncertainty if Edward will be self loathing or feel differently, truly shows how deep Emm's feelings are for E!
I do love that Edward yelled at him to get over here and do his "job"! He was definitely not letting this possibility just go away. And not just because of the happy ending, but because of the happy beginning they could possibly have. And then when he reassured Emm again, I wanted to tell them to do it again! This was all about trust, faith, and curiousity of each others bodies and minds. Since neither of them had any idea what the other was thinking.