Reviews for The Lion King 2 Simba's man cub
lonewolf chapter 12 . 12/5/2014
u should take out "let" in the sentence
Chris Williams chapter 7 . 6/17/2014
You messed up on a few words i've read over but its really good though
Chris Williams chapter 5 . 6/17/2014
i don't mean to bother you but I still think sora should change into a lion
Chris Williams chapter 4 . 6/17/2014
well that felt special
Chris Williams chapter 2 . 6/17/2014
will there b some point in the story when actually changes into a real lion? im just very curious
about that
Guest chapter 17 . 5/4/2014
eep. fangirl faints. this was so wonderful to read
Guest chapter 7 . 5/3/2014
aw so sweet
Nightwatching Breeze chapter 1 . 4/2/2014 I have a couple of concerns. First off, you did not use proper grammar and half of the time I couldn't make out what was happening. You rushed through the chapter, not taking much notice of the details. Maybe you are young, and that it understandable. But if you are older, well, please correct your fanfictions. Other than that, it's coming along nicely. :)
Memaiva chapter 17 . 12/17/2012
Great final chapter! It's sad to see it end, but everyone's story has to finish at some point.
Vanitas' Queen21 chapter 16 . 11/29/2012
not bad, but i think xehanort should have died in the end.
Memaiva chapter 16 . 11/29/2012
Great job on the chapter! Poor Axel, and amazing job on the fight! Can't wait for the next chapter!
3DMGLonemachine chapter 15 . 11/19/2012
I love this chapter. :)
Memaiva chapter 15 . 11/19/2012
Good job! Your spelling needs a little work ( Roxas, and Ventus*) otherwise, keep up the good work!
Vanitas' Queen21 chapter 15 . 11/19/2012
Not bad lil bro! Chk ur spelling though.
Vanitas' Queen21 chapter 14 . 11/5/2012
pretty cute lil bro!
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