Reviews for Please, Don't Wait in the Car
MeriSalope chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
well done! congrats on the first story, please continue to share
smkfan14evr chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
awe, so sweet! great job!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
I really liked this story. It was very sweet. Please keep writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Awesome story! I love it! You captured the character's personalties so well! Love to read more from you!
Mandlee123 chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Bravo! Thjs was a terrific first try; I want seconds!
Loretta chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Liked the story very much
WasWoksa chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
That was awesome. I enjoyed the opening hook. Had to keep reading to find out where that was going. I didn't know where in the history we were going to land, so that was a fun little trip. Personally, I like where you have them a few years down the road, and I would put them in a very similar place...which you'll see if I ever get my own story finished!
Marsha chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Loved it. Really like to see new stories. Thanks.
cyndergator chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Grest job, Love the title too :)
Erika chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Very nice - I always get a little sad at stories where they leave the field so I really enjoyed the ending.