|Reviews for A rebel first class|
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/23/2012
Good story would be much better if less mistakes some sentances skip whole phrases and it takes awhile to read because of all the mistakes you really should reread or get a beta to reread it before you post it...
| fandom.writer.2012 chapter 2 . 9/21/2012
nice idea but you seriously need to check your grammar and spelling serious mistakes!
like, afcaurse - of course