|Reviews for The Lord of Mists|
| coolcat12345 chapter 16 . 9/25/2015
This is updated! Thank God!
This looks really interesting. Part with article is beast. It is really strange and whimsical like old stories.
Only part what I would critic is '' He felt sick. Something was rising and he had no idea what to do against it.'' and part with Pansy and Draco. That sentence is much telling, not showing, and that scene doesn't have much wrong, just somehow doesn't work with me.
| god of all chapter 16 . 7/16/2015
Great chapter story so far please continue this story soon...
| plums chapter 10 . 7/15/2015
Okay... Totally ready to drop this story like a bad habit after his chapter.
Let's keep the inhuman torture/attempted murder QUIET, because if we talk about it... "They've won"
Stupidest plot element ever.
| Hurin3 chapter 8 . 7/14/2015
Not sure what to make of your two main OCs. If the are meant to be amoral, they seem awfully psychopathic at times, esp. Bodmahl in this chapter, murdering the Mallorys.
Not meant as a criticism, more of an observation
I found your story on sfjoellen's favorites. Lots of interesting, out-of-the-way stories there.
| Hurin3 chapter 15 . 7/14/2015
Wow, quite a story! Looking forward to more.
| Pokemark17 chapter 2 . 7/12/2015
To be honest I don't believe America should ever really have a big part of harry potter simply because all American wizards would be muggleborns or at least half bloods if your both historically accurate and realistic
| coolcat12345 chapter 5 . 1/1/2015
This is so interesting. How many names Jonathan has? Are goblins,house elves, trolls, pixies,mermaids and some others part of fae? Bodmahl is great, I love her tone and way of telling things. Would like to get her backstory.
| coolcat12345 chapter 14 . 11/9/2014
Awesome. I think Dumbledore fought and won little too esily, but it's corrected as he was outsmarted by Jonathan! I hope we see more of Sidhe and that they won't defeated.
| coolcat12345 chapter 12 . 11/9/2014
Interesting, but I feel like Dumbledore cheated Morrigan, and I am dissapointed she couldn't destroy stone.
| coolcat12345 chapter 7 . 11/9/2014
Great work with legend, I hope Sidhe wouldn't be such big antagonists,after all they are amoral not immoral, neither evil or good. Or you could split them in traditional Seelie and Unseelie Courts,and have conflict. Lady of the Lake was originally one of fae, so it helps. I am interested in professor Morgan,for moment I thought she was Morrigan (who is in fact redhead in myths,not raven) then Morgan La Fey.
| sfjoellen chapter 14 . 6/4/2013
wonderful story.. i was on the edge of the chair reading the fight
| sfjoellen chapter 12 . 6/4/2013
very interesting magic. not the usual card tricks and explosions. if the old gods and legends have power do the newer ones? holy water, exorcism, etc
| sfjoellen chapter 11 . 6/4/2013
great chapter. your hermione is awesome
| sfjoellen chapter 10 . 6/4/2013
i don't mean to disparage your writing. i often wonder why the light siders don't hit back. i would break malfoy into bits for what he says and does. call it pratricide. where i grew up talking that way would earn him some serious lumps. and burning her with only a stunner as the result? so not happening.
| sfjoellen chapter 5 . 6/4/2013
i did a quick google on the pale man and bodmahl, they are part of a movie and your story respectively. i thought that their was backstory available that i didn't know about, being mostly ignorant of celtic mythology, or any mythology actually. i'll just press on and see how you develop harry's evil enemies.. lucifer i got of course..being a good catholic kid..