Reviews for Gravity
Guest chapter 9 . 8/5
Hi! I've just found your DW stories and I'm enjoying them a lot :) I hope you don't think it's too rude or anything but I have a few minor suggestions just to make your story more factually correct. I'm assuming you are American? I realise it can be tricky to write for stories set in other countries, and DW centres around the UK quite heavily. The first thing I noticed is that when you introduced Starship UK for 'The Beast Below' episode, you said United Kingdom of Britain. Unfortunately this is incorrect: it would be the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland- GB NI UK. Secondly when you are taking about Ealing in chapter 9 you say that it is a village outside of London, Ealing is actually IN London, not outside. I hope this helps you and doesn't annoy you, I think that changing small facts like these can really improve your story a lot :)
Lady Artimes Blaine chapter 45 . 8/2/2014
finally married. What a roller coaster.
Neko 97 chapter 12 . 12/9/2013
Friends! :D Yeeeess!
Princess-Amon-Rae chapter 44 . 11/26/2013
After having inhaled this story as well there are a few things I'd like to touch upon..
THE PROPOSAL! Isqeuealed like you would not believe when he finally popped the question! My family thought I was crazy but who cares!
THE WEDDING! I grinned and laughs and squealed until my face ached! I LOVED IT! It was so perfect and their vows! THE VOWS!
Seriously I adored this story and I will definitely be reading the sequel! Im super excited!
Areus Bookworm chapter 45 . 11/25/2013
Loooooved it even more than the last one!
Is there a third chapter 45 . 10/28/2013
Guest chapter 9 . 10/12/2013
I dont like how the doctor treats olivia
...hes an ass BUT i lovr how she bites back witha snap! Xxx
Annie chapter 38 . 7/10/2013
A) I didn't see THAT ONE coming and
skidney chapter 44 . 6/10/2013
awesome chapter!
goaliefreak753 chapter 43 . 6/10/2013
I love this I cant stop reading
Mariquita-Gatanegra chapter 44 . 6/9/2013
Let me know when the next one is out! :D Really enjoyed this chapter, very sweet. And I have been wondering what would happen if Jack and River were ever in the same room... :) Loved this!
Liverpaste chapter 44 . 6/9/2013
I can't believe it's over! So sad! But can't wait for the next one! You ended it perfectly!
skidney chapter 43 . 6/8/2013
Awesome chapter!
Mariquita-Gatanegra chapter 43 . 6/8/2013

Tayla chapter 43 . 6/7/2013
The moment where Olivia and the Doctor danced to their song was so SWEET! :) One of the cutest and sweetest moments ever. :D
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