Reviews for Protection Detail
helloyesimhere chapter 9 . 4/6/2017
This! was great! I loved it. Amazing job!
MagicWarriorDragon chapter 9 . 4/29/2016
I really loved this story. Very well written. :)
loosecat56 chapter 1 . 1/30/2016
Yay! Dimension travel!
Mudkip chapter 9 . 1/24/2016
Ahh I really enjoyed this! I'm a little upset that it had to end so soon, but I absolutely loved the ending. This is a great fic, and I hope you are doing well.
Unaviajante chapter 9 . 1/17/2016
Gracias por actualizar! Había leído este fic hace años y siempre me había quedado con la intriga sobre cómo terminaba, fue un fic increíble, lo disfrute mucho :)
YellowAngela chapter 9 . 1/2/2016
Omg! You honestly updated and finished! Your story was awesome and I figured the way it ended would have been acceptable if abrupt. But this is great! I thought I was seeing things when I saw this. Then when I realized it was real! I rushed my kids to bed, locked myself in the bathroom so I could read this and so no one could hear me squeal. I know, tmi. Okay enough fangirling. Thanks for finishing. If only others would do the same. Then it would be a great year.
Flicker's Owner chapter 9 . 1/2/2016
Omg Zal, it's been 3 years. I'm glad you took time to edit this even though the previous one is finished. And I agree, this is better than the last one. I especially like the part Caesar asked many times because he simply doesn't get it. I also like that Rex keeps trying and doesn't back down. Poor Six, it must've been awkward for him. Thx for sharing Zal, and happy new year!
Mudkip chapter 8 . 6/24/2015
I love this! I really hope you continue it and release another chapter! 3
Ghost chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
ahhhh gosh- I just can't stop myself from reading and rereading this wonderful fic. You really have a way with words, and every scene has been perfectly in character as well! This story is so chillingly wonderful, and I do hope you'll update or continue soon! Thank you!
shejams chapter 8 . 1/19/2014
That was AWESOME!
I just found this Tay and I couldn't stop reading. It was so intense and emotionally staggering.
What's going to happen next? Did they reach home? Is Cesar alright? This is not the end, is it?
Please, please, update. I need closure.
Trinity Stark chapter 8 . 8/20/2013
Good story, but the thing I'm wondering is will they get home or will it be another dimension?
SirenSounds97 chapter 8 . 7/12/2013
Oh my god. Just... Wow. That was probably the best story I have ever read on here. The dialogue was excellent and they never seemed out of character. It was just so original and awesome! Thank you so much for writing this! :D
Emil Lime chapter 8 . 6/25/2013
That chapter was intense! It was so goo I couldn't stop reading it until the end!

So here's my full review!

Alright, your characterization is spot on! Since this was the first GR fanfic that I've read, I must say that you've set the bar very, very high as far as proper characterization goes! I felt as if I were reading the script idea for a new episode of GR. Rex felt realistic and his reactions were perfect. The way you described his thoughts, especially regarding the various Caesars he encountered, with his unsettled yet caring reactions, and the the memory erasing, with the panic you wrote so well you had me trembling, was brilliant. Six was also perfectly written. You included enough dialogue that he was believable, walking that careful line one must walk when writing stoic characters. Too much talking and it's ooc, not enough and it's like they're not even there. I especially liked his interactions with Rex. You captured the father/son relationship beautifully! Especially where Six uses a gun to finish off 81, even though e doesn't use them. It shows that he isn't willing o leave Rex's side, even to use the weapon he'd prefer to use. His interactions with The Caesars were also good. You really captured the suspicion. And of course, last but not least, the Caesars. For the brief moments we see some of the other ones, you did a good job at making them different enough to e distinguishable. You captured the real Caesar well and, of course, you write crazy wonderfully. At the end of it all, I actually felt sorry for 81. He still deserved to die, but I couldn't help but feel that, had things been just a little different, he wouldn't have done what he did. So thank you for writing a villain that wasn't one-dimensional and boring. Like I said, your characterizations were great!

Your plot was fantastic as well. Though I haven't been exposed to very many GR stories, I still feel that this idea was very original. The concept worked out well and it wasn't diluted with a lot of outside drama. The small setting and the limited cast made for a concentrated storyline that was immersive and easy to follow.

The execution of your story telling was wonderful as well. Your pacing was great. There was just enough down time between major events to allow some processing to occur. I never felt that the story was rushed or that the plot was butchered because of pacing. It felt fluent and it had momentum, which is great! I also enjoyed the way you told the story. You're similes and metaphors were written well and appeared to be given a lot of thought! Also, you added details but didn't dwell on them. You'd give just enough explanation that the rooms, the sounds, the people and the situation wasn't confusing and then you allowed me to fill in the rest with my imagination! Not too much, not too little! That really made your story enjoyable!

Your story has been great so far, though I find myself wondering if its actually completed as it just doesn't say so (or it does as I'm as blind as 81). I can see chapter 8 being the end, where its left up to assumption on what happens with Caesar and such, but I can also see another chapter being out in to tie everything together. I suppose that's your call and whatever the call actually is, I'll accept it.

If this is the end, thank you for the wonderful story! If its not (which honestly I'm hoping its jot), I look forward to more!

Update soon!
-Emil Lime
Emil Lime chapter 7 . 6/25/2013
It's good that the real Caesar (finally figured out how to spell it!) is here, though I'm a bit skeptical of him considering how 81 turned. Either way, the plan sounds like a good idea, better than their first one :)

I only have one more chapter to go before I caught up!
-Emil Lime
Emil Lime chapter 6 . 6/25/2013
And I actually felt sorry for Cesear when Rex and Six found I just wanna punch him in the face. This chapter was fantastic! I was on the edge of my seat the entire time, and I was uber surprised when Six and Rex found all of the dead Cesears! And I like how you don't give us the gory details and linger on it. It's a shock and we move on-to the next shock of course.

Brilliant pacing! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
-Emil Lime
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