Reviews for Professor Layton and the Deadly Illness
zaylo267 chapter 3 . 8/15
Best fanfic ever!
SevenOverThree chapter 3 . 3/5/2013
This is a fantastic story, and I can't wait to see the next chapter.
Bee.Mii chapter 3 . 10/1/2012
This is a great story. You asked if you should add a villain in the previous chapters. Well, since the story occurs during the 2nd trilogy of the Professor Layton series, you could add in Descole...or for humor, add Don Paolo... :)

I hope you continue and I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
Nixi Stasia chapter 3 . 9/28/2012
Good chapter. Description is great. Only don't write 'Emmy and Luke' when you switch around the perspectives. Put something like 'meanwhile, downstairs...'

I hope something else happens soon.
The Mocking J chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
Awww I love how Emmy and Luke are taking care of the professor (I kept hoping Emmy would give him a get well soon kiss ). Yes, you should definately add a villain... Maybe Descole? Or Don Paolo?
Victoria-White-Cat chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
Yes I think a villain would be quite a good! You could make one up your use Desc
The Mocking J chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Poor Professor, even true gentlemen become unwell every once in a while. This is a simple idea but the description is marvellous and you got Luke and Laytons' personalities spot on. Please update soon!
Nixi Stasia chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
... I'm sad now.

You know why I'm sad?

It's because there's only one chapter.

If you write another chapter, I'll be happy.
Victoria-White-Cat chapter 1 . 9/21/2012