Reviews for And Jumpers Hide His Scars
Katrina chapter 21 . 8/1
Can't wait for the next chapter! This is really good! I hope to hear soon!
Lord of Time10 chapter 21 . 8/1
This story is great! PLEASE write more!
Moriarty chapter 21 . 5/8
Please update soon, I'm new to the Sherlock fandom and I love this story (and your sister is hilarious!)
Cumberwat chapter 21 . 4/18
You should keep writing! These are really good! This series of fanfics are my favorite ones ever and they're really amazingly written.:)
drwhogeek15 chapter 21 . 2/2/2015
This is amazing and your sister is freaking hilarious do not stop this please!
cunning bird chapter 21 . 1/8/2015
Soooo where's the rest of the fic that I've been PATIENTLY waiting for? Lol. You need to update!
silentbreathofmidnightmemory chapter 16 . 11/26/2014
Ghosts and ghouls! A Trumpkin pumpkin!
Mystery Shipper chapter 6 . 10/31/2014
Darling, I ship it. Shipshipshipshipship it. Beautifully crafted, I adore this. -as a fellow inexperienced Fanfictioner, I think you are doing a wonderful job! A* on your homework my dear!
Love ShutupImfangirling xxx
221B Middle-Earth chapter 21 . 10/1/2014
OMG this is just pure gold! None of your chapters were boring despite what you think and once I read the first sentence... I was hooked! You have to keep writing, I know it gets hard but just keep writing, you are very talented!
Please, please keep writing! Sincerely,
221B Middle-Earth
HRHQueenMycroft chapter 21 . 6/12/2014
You should just write a story about your life. It'd be hilarious.
Guinevere81 chapter 21 . 6/2/2014
Really liking this. Very imaginative.
Xaviera chapter 21 . 4/17/2014
WOW! Really good! Couldn't stop reading, very realistic
God's Little Hope chapter 21 . 3/26/2014
Please continue its such a great story! Thanks for writing.
Cosmic Colors chapter 21 . 2/14/2014
Oh, it has been over year! Whyyyyyyyy? Please update, and please let it be soon!
Random Flyer chapter 8 . 1/13/2014
I didn't think the dialogue in this chapter was confusing. If you have problems with that, though there are a couple good rules of thumb to follow to make sure everyone knows whom you're talking about:

- If you start a new paragraph always restate the name of the person you're talking about before moving into personal pronouns. (If there's only one person in the scene this guideline can be bent, but if there's more than one character it helps clear up confusion before it starts.)

- Always keep dialogue (and accompanying narration) separated between characters and restate whom is speaking with each new paragraph. So if character X says something and Character Y snorts at it, place character Y's snorting in their own paragraph.

- If you talk about more than one person in a sentence, only use personal pronouns for one of them refer to the other by their name each time they come up in the sentence. It can get a little repetitive, but it keeps the reader from having to figure out who was what.

Still enjoying the story, looking forward to more. :)
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