Reviews for Dark Night of the Soul
hidekey chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Nice, short dialogue. Not overdone, which is easy to do when characters talk about something important. Marcoh is a bit out of character, since he defected out of guilt so intense that death was too good for him. But, he could be putting up a false front I suppose.
Oedipus Tex chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Awwww. Two alchemists bonding in the middle of the hellfires of war. How nice. Seriously, very nice. Adds depth to the relationship. Also, thanks for the bit of Roy choosing to use a gun on the Rockbells versus alchemy. It still doesn't make much sense to me why a State Alchemist would be the one executing some good country doctors (isn't that what privates are for? :P ), but at least you came up with a good reason why Roy would use a gun. Thanks!