Reviews for Where's My Prize?
Guest chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! BETER AT LAUGHING THAN YOU!he he...
Hazukashit chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Awww is there more? And Grimm why did you left Ichi at that state.. Www, i hope that you update more 'cause i bet they are going to be good, hot- e v e) .. I'll be waiting
jessica chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
more please!
Pyrane chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
Hum, I'm also curious of : What's next ? *rire*
Thanks !

***Pyrane***
YamatosSenpai chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
I think that you could easily develop this story into a more elaborate version, or even continue onto the next time. (lol). It was short, crisp, sexy and enjoyable... Good work.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
nice
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Better lock it in your pocket,
Taking this one to the grave.
If i show you,
Then i know you wont tell what i said.
Because two can keep a secret if one of them is dead.
Look into my eyes,
Now you're getting sleepy.
Are you hypnotized by secrets that you're keeping.
I know what you're keeping.
I know what you're keeping.
Got a secret.
Can you keep it?
Swear, this one you'll save.
Better lock it in your pocket,
Taking this one to the grave.
If i show you,
Then i know you wont tell what i said.
Because two can keep a secret if one of them is dead.
Allison?
Yes, catherine?
I have something i want to tell you but you have to promise never to tell anyone.
I promise.
Do you swear on your life?
I swear on my life.
You swore you'd never tell.
You swore you'd never tell.
You swore you'd never tell.
You swore you'd never tell.
Got a secret.
Can you keep it?
Swear, this one you'll save.
Better lock it in your pocket,
Taking this one to the grave.
If i show you,
Then i know you wont tell what i said.
Because two can keep a secret if one of them is dead.
Yes, two can keep a secret if one of them is dead.
Yes, two can keep a secret if one of them is dead.
Yes, two can keep a secret if one of us is dead.
Sarame Uchiha chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
I think I would like to see a continuation of this. It would be rather interesting!
Kurosaki's theone chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
It was reallyyy funny.! I really lilked it and you should definitely think about making a sequel, even if it is short, just to see how it all ends.
Thanks for posting, it was a very good story.! :]
akatem chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Nice! I hope you do more on this, I'm curious about what he does with the picture!
Anon chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Hello Nova reviewer is right although it was far from constructive criticism. Some people...

It was good! :3 Your punctuation is nice, characterisation is good, though I think Grimmjow would call Ichigo 'Kurosaki'. :3 More detail would be nice overall but it was only a quick oneshot! Looking forward to a sequel if you plan to write one.

Yeah, Grimmjow's hair is more of a light blue than teal? For future reference, eyes and hair are light blue whilst the markings are more of a teal? Though, it's nice to add descriptions like 'bright, piercing eyes' as a quick example. Though it all goes on the scenario, I guess? Anyway, good job, I like. 3
animeloverjanet chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
I liked it! And I think you should continue it ;D
Nova Alexandria chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Grimmjow's hair is not teal... Teal is a medium green/blur colour, like the markings around his eye.