Reviews for Solemn Vows
Zerojackson chapter 2 . 10/2/2012
Another great chapter! I really liked the bond you've portrayed with Minato, good work there.
And the Kazekage seems like a reasonable fellow, which is good. So, I look forward to reading the next chapter!
9/10.
Zerojackson chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Wow! What can I say, this was really well done! The description was fantastic, the way it flowed was superb. I think you could have perhaps touched on how badly Jiraiya wanted to catch and kill Orochimaru, but it's only the first chapter. The description of his underground bunker was really well done, and I think you portrayed Orochimaru as a sick and twisted psychopath, and yet a clever and intellectual scientist. You have both done remarkably well, and I will definitely be checking out your other stories, if you have them. I cannot wait to read more, excellent job!
9/10.