Reviews for Beyond innocence
ican'tfindouthowtodeletemyacco chapter 3 . 10/2/2012
I don't think someone that's 15 years old would be as short as Aventus...
LadyDragon1316 chapter 3 . 10/2/2012
Very, very Brotherhood styled death. I look forward to what comes next.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/26/2012
theres not much to improve on, your charcters seem belivabal and kindav interesting, only thing to improve is grammer but its not a really big issue really if you keep writing the way you are now youll have one very enthusiastic fan
LadyDragon1316 chapter 2 . 9/24/2012
Nice prospect, nice set up. But the second rule didn't make much sense. And there were a few grammatical errors. Beyond that, I'm interested to know how this turns out.
DawnsBreak chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Interesting. More?
gindie chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
i really would like another chapter