Reviews for You're Doing It Wrong
TheLastofUs chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
LOL XDDDD I'M DYINGGGG
OodleNoodle chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Oh my gosh... I can't even breathe! xD This was flippin' perfect! I love how you've written Mattie here! It seems like it would be accurate to his character. Poor Alfred, though. I can't begin to imagine the embarrassment that would have come along with this.

Keep up the good work! o/
PernicketyAnon chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
This story is hilarious, and reminds me of Canada's Three Hour Rant, I only wish it continued long enough to see England's reaction to America's...creative imagination. On the 'thrust not thrusted' issue, I went back and checked the beginning (because I am that sad:( ) and found that you're Grammar Nazism works a bit too well, because it does say 'thrust' not 'thrusted' at the beginning.

Still hilarious though.
MAPLETALIA chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
AHAHAHAHA! XDD
THIS ACTUALLY HAPPENED ONCE! I FOUND MY FRIEND WRITING HENTAI PORN. IT WAS AT A PARTY. EVERYTHING SAID AND WRITTEN HERE WAS EXACTLY WHAT HAPPENED. T WAS A VERY GOOD THING THE TEACHER WAS NOT HERE!
Yes, I even included about asking the talk.
My favorite moment was when I said: (I'm not going to put names) _, I know you are an A student in Language Arts. But this thrusted word you speak of? No. Thrust, yes. Thrusting, also yes. Thrusted? No."
YES. I HAD THIS MEMORIZED INCASE SOMEONE WROTE ANYTHING WRONG OR THERE SHOULD BE MULTIPLE GRAMMAR CORRECTIONS!
Crazed King chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
Poor poor America. Caught while writing gay porn. Pfft... Canada went all grammary on him...
IAmTheHeroOfTime chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Omg yhat
BlessedRain chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
This. Was. Brilliant. I loved it. Please keep writing for these two!
Artistic Tomato chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
Wow, an educational and amusing fic with a dash of a threesome! I must say, you've quicky become one of my favorite writers on this site. Though, you've totally hurt my pride of using grammar properly (I must review notes now-).

I adore the way you portray Matthew in a lot of your stories. p v p He's not the shy stuttering man many make him to be. And who knew he makes such a good grammar nerd?

You shoul give me some English lessons, ahaha!

Keep up the amazing work!

P.S. Totally off topic from the story but, I'd like to say your portrayal of 2P!America made me want to roleplay him. q v Q
RandomHetaliaFan chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
XXXXDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD DDDDDDD I-I just loved this soo much... my favorite line, "Arthur, when you gave this boy The Talk, what exactly did you tell him?" XXXXDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD DDDDD I am laughing soooo hard, and you know, I finally figured out how France left his mark on Canada...being a beta for gay porn... Yup, that's what he gets from his Papa.
hika-kao-love chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
omg lolololololol
Sanity and Katlin chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
hehe poor Alfred

S&K
juggalet135 chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
I cant fuckin breathe im laughing so hard so now my family thinks im insane i love this you need to get a award for funniest canada/america story
putyournamehere chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
This is one of the best humerous stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading. And I simply came across by accident after typing 'You're doing it wrong' into the google search bar. Thank you Google.

Anyway, I love Canada in this story, he just doesn't care about the fact that America was writing gay porn about himself, Canada and France having a threesome, rather what was important was America's poor writing skills and knowledge of anatomy. He doesn't even seemed fazed when stating things like '"And nobody wants cum dripping down their legs. It's disgusting."' Is this because of all those years of living with France? Is he just no longer affected by this?

Either way, it's a brilliant story (although I would like to see Arthur's reaction to America's masterpiece, after all America did seem very panicked at the end). Thank you for wirting it and for sharing with the world the knowledge that the word 'thrusted' does not exist.
Tigare chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Orbs in place of eyes is my pet peeve. THANK. YOU.
Gurly HR chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
That little scene that America did, just shocked me. Is tha what people are really writing? Oh my God...
ANYWAYS, it was a really good get to the point story. Nice job.
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