Reviews for On the Road: LA to NY
Lobisomem chapter 10 . 1/13/2013
Tnx a lot for such a good & lovely story! It's great! :))) Bad news indeed about the story not to be continued.((( Nevertheless, tnank you again & again for the story!
PISSED OFF chapter 10 . 10/28/2012
geez -.- first u dont update for a month then u do but it wasnt a real update, and after that i get excited that u update but NOOOO IT WAS A FREAKING WRITING CONTEST AND THEN AFTER U SAY 'im not writing anymore bye' geez this was the only thing i look forward too...
FanfictionPolice chapter 2 . 10/28/2012
This is not fiction, delete as soon as possible or you'll be reported.
Guest chapter 10 . 10/24/2012
I just love love love twilight..
broke my heart when I found out they broke up..
You can get this story going with of course solving the initial problem, as to why you run out of ideas.
don't let it stop you.. keep going, your good...you just need a little help with the controlling of events, don't be in a rush to get to a certain part of a story by removing others or making it fast forward even if you still want to keep on adding more, if you feel that its important keep going, if not try making it short or summarize...
Actors usually go for honestly or evasion...
hope that can help.. ..
keep up the good work...
Guest chapter 10 . 10/21/2012
i think you should keep doing what you were doing!but i guess after talking about all the interviews it can get boring so you can summarize it like you said.
Update soon!plz
Jordy3333 chapter 10 . 10/23/2012
I want you to write about your thongs on where they are now, in their relationship doing the promos for the last film.. as well as those pool side photos that were taken, or those other photos of them together
Hannie597 chapter 10 . 10/22/2012
Love nrxt
doves1993 chapter 10 . 10/22/2012
For a future chapter I would love to find out about what really happened with Kristen and rupert, and it either be a complete puck or Rupert conned Kris, and have Kristen end up pregnant/find out she is pregnant with Rob's child :) . Really love this story hopefully you'll get over your writers block.
RN1986 chapter 10 . 10/22/2012
Hi! I think you have to write the first interview because they have to explain how there faces are like that but you could finish promo of BD2 with a exclusive interview, maybe on Oprah or something, here they can tell the true about the scandal. It's just an a idea but i hope it would help you! Don't give up on the story, please! Bye
cjrich chapter 10 . 10/21/2012
Know you don't want to do all the crazy interviews, but this one needs to be done. How Rob explains his face, Kristen her eye, even with all the make up it must show through. I would love someone who could write about the eye to eye exchanges between these two in public and what they may be saying to each other. Love hearing how interrupted their lives get with the the paps. How they have to duck, cover and sometimes change plans, how they travel. How that changes with their fans that do care so much. Mostly want to fantasize about their alone/together time and the love and humor that I see there between them and times with all the obligations, movies and PR. Also time with family, friends and all their animals. Once BD2 is done I would love to see them be able to get away, just the two of them to Tahiti or someplace they can relax, be themselves, have some fun...and maybe, just maybe start work on their greatest production. Yes I am talking about TGC and yes I am a total romantic. LOL, Cheri
f-f-o chapter 10 . 10/21/2012
umm for a future chapter it would be interesting to see like a time jump maybe after promo where the scandal is truly addressed and everyone finds out the truth and Rob and Kristen finally get their little aha told you so moment lol maybe I'm just too vindictive
Monamour52 chapter 9 . 10/21/2012
Update soon !
Guest chapter 9 . 10/14/2012
OMG this is so good!thats how i imagine their life
LenaLove95 chapter 4 . 10/15/2012
They are so sweet
LenaLove95 chapter 3 . 10/15/2012
Great chapter
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