|Reviews for Her Fault|
| Cheeky Slytherin Lass chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
This was beautiful. Heartbreaking. Enough so that I actually did tear up a little. You're an amazing writer, dear.
| Fire The Canon chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
This is my first of 2 reviews for pole vault :)
This was really sweet. And very believable too. I loved it. And, as expected, no spelling or grammar mistakes. Well done and congrats for coming second :)
| ASkyie chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
In it's own way, this is a sweet little piece.
| Exceeds Expectations chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
I'm still surprised at how quickly you wrote this! That is skill, gurl.
This was sort of sweet, but also very harsh. Poor Andromeda. I like how you rationalised Andromeda's guilt, how she thought it was her fault, etc. I love the [If Alice had been in any state to respond...] line, simply because it highlights the sort of bitterness that's there now that everything has changed.
Well done, especially on get it done and published in 15 minutes!