|Reviews for I Can See Forever In Your Eyes|
| Guest chapter 34 . 1/13
why the hell did he call lana? that really bothers me.
she should not even enter into this picture anymore
esp after the closure they had, that he had with their
conversation at the reunion.
then he blurts out he loves her after being distant for
a while. i don't get it. so as superman he may be "cold and
logical" as the leader of jl but as clark, he grew up in a happy loving home and
he had no problem with love. sure his father may not voice it
but clark had no problem with love. throughout this whole story,
i had problems with their aloof detached behavior and then
clark still has feelings of lana, then his distance from her then
revelation, he loves her and has for a long time? i just don't
buy it. yes, they are best of friends and enjoy each other's company,
i can see the connection but the deep emotional bond of love is
something i didnt really see/read...even the ending when they
declared their love seems so matter of fact without the depth.
idk, something is amiss. i could see they really cared for each other
but this all encompassing love i expected was not there.
| Guest chapter 28 . 1/13
fyi, 2 metas having sex in a reg bed in sm's apartment
usually does not work. that's why they need to go to the
fortress for that. also, i am surprised that sm was worried
about having sex with diana while she was drunk. many
couples have sex while drunk and it's quite enjoyable.
there should be no problems or regrets about that.
| Guest chapter 24 . 1/13
if you read their conversation and picture them as we all do
with our reading, they are very detached with their words and
behavior. this conversation about getting pregnant...it should
be somewhat intimate serious but i see no intimacy.
she says " i can't get pregnant" and he says "good" like
that's it? with all of his feeling lonely being the last kryptonian,
that's all he has to say? then she gives some cryptic answer about
how she does not want to get pregnant but she can and all he has to
say is ok? idk, but the dialogue between them is very aloof somewhat
apathetic... just dont feel the supposed love they are developing...again,
thought sm was immediately besotted with ww but not in your story.
| Guest chapter 23 . 1/13
because of both their pasts and how they were raised,
i am very surprised that either one of them would
have sex without pronoucing "i love you" to each other.
this is completely off...
| Guest chapter 22 . 1/13
this annoys me. so they kissed a few before. but your writing
does not show much passion, nor desire between the 2.
yes, they have enjoyed their dates, they are best friends, but
it never dove into the depth of their feelings, their desires for each
other. i dont even remember them having a make out session
or times where they went beyond 1st base...then all of a sudden
they are making love...i just don't feel it in this story. this is supposed
to be an epic love story between sm and ww and i havent felt that
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/13
all i could think here was how dare lana?
clark is like a puppy dog immediately going
to lana when she called. then she speaks to diana,
a stranger, giving her advice about clark. i would be
very insulted. who the hell is lana to be putting her
nose into their relationship? why does diana allow her
to give her opinion? why does lana believe what
she has to say is so damn important to clark and diana?
this whole thing was ridiculous. i would have told lana
to mind her own damn business...while she's at it, she
should also ask kent what his feelings are towards lana?
it just seems he still has much romantic feelings for lana
unresolved still no matter what he thinks. it seems to me
if lana had changed her mind, clark may have second thoughts
which i would certainly feel ww does NOT deserve and
she can do so much better than having someone who still
has feelings for his ex.
| Guest chapter 21 . 1/13
this kind of threw me...
a guy in love in a committed relationship does NOT
throw a fit if his gf leaves anything in his home.
sure, some guys can have some issues with it but they
are ones who do not want to commit.
sm should not be in that category with ww. he should
be all in esp since he is a kansas farm boy. this is a rejection with
a capital R. then he gives her 2 small bags? and diana is ok with
this? i would be totally insulted. idk everyone's position on commitment but
this does NOT show one's true commitment and exclusivity of
being in love which is what we usually assume with sm before he
takes someone to bed, not his personality at all.
| Guest chapter 20 . 1/13
a few things i am having trouble with this story.
first of all, superman has been in love with ww since he
met her...obviously in lust at least...however, in this story,
he seems to have not only no love for her (just like) but
has no libido.
certainly, it appears he has absolutely no passion for her.
sure he kissed her passionately a couple of times but other
than that even while in bed together, they only thought about
which side of the bed they wanted and how sleepy they are.
WTH? i realize you may want a slow burn but this is ridiculous.
he showed more feelings talking to lana than with diana.
i dont see an angst, no hidden passion, no in love butterflies
fluttering. i just see 2 best friends who kiss once in a while.
idk, i just expected more from these 2 dating than what
i am reading. yes, they are getting to know each other better, but
they already have known each other for awhile, now they need to
be more intimate...i do not see any intimacy between them.
| Cloud Narukami chapter 34 . 6/9/2016
I liked the story but you were making things unnecessarily weird at the end between Clark and Diana
| Guest chapter 34 . 1/7/2016
That was one of the best reads ive had in while, i loved it
| dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 12/9/2015
Great chapter and plot
| Guest chapter 16 . 9/2/2015
The part where Clark says he hasn't talked to superman he just sees them an then it says in the mirror
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/31/2015
I don't mean to spam or anything because you're one of the best fanfic writers I read, but please just stop making Clark do that because it makes him look like an idiot and we all know he's not.
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/31/2015
I like your stories a lot, but if I had a criticism it would be that at the end of each chapter you have Clark say some ridiculous sentence summing up what he thought of what happened and it's kind of really not a good way to end the chapter. This happens in every story you've written with chapters. Please stop.
| sram15 chapter 12 . 8/19/2015
Despite the fact that this story was completed a while ago and that I've probably read it like 5 or 6 times already, one thing that I did not like from this particular story was the way that Lana behaved at the beginning. I took her to be acting in a very entitled way. The way that she 'summoned' Clark and how he would quickly go to her side whenever she called was something that I did not like. Her going up to Diana while at the reunion was something that I thought was unnecessary because if she wanted closure, then she should not have spoken to someone she didn't even know and should have spoken to Clark when they were both ready, not when she chose. I just felt that maybe Clark should not have even gone to speak with her simply because she went to 'their' tree and would call his name and wait until he showed up. Kind of reminds me of Lois jumping off buildings just to get Superman's attention.
With that said, since I have read this story many times, I can easily say that it is a great story. I am currently on chapter 12 but at the pace that I am going i will be finishing it again fairly soon. Great job with this story.