Reviews for Thoughts in the Dungeon
Bookworm41 chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Very sad, but very well written. I loved it.
alabasterhalls chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
"Soon we will be, too."

Well, that's sad!

Wonderfully written as always, darling. :D
sylvi10 chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Very nice. I've been thinking about this episode a bit lately, too, and I really like your insights here, particularly the two of them wanting to connect but not knowing how, Much resisting the urge to fill the silence and Allan just wishing he would say something. It feels like a very believable scenario. Thanks for sharing!
LadyKate1 chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Wow, beautifully written! I love the way you capture Much and Allan's thoughts and emotions, and the difference in their voices. Well done.
manxcatmom chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Aww, Allan and Much! Good insight into their thoughts and feelings. I like Allan thinking that it's wrong for Much to be silent, "but 'e's not sayin' anything." How true! And Much believing that Allan sees him as weak-poor Much. If he only knew that Allan does care.
Nice bit of writing, Ghanaperu!