|Reviews for A Girl Can Dream|
| couldntlogon chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
nice story. chin up bebe :D
I was just like that in 7th grade, a nerd. but now Im head cheerleader, although I am, still a nerdy girl. LOL! so I really do undertstand this!
oh yeah, and the best friend thing is true too, when I was all nerdy, I had been bff's with the most popular girl in school, now Im the most popular girl in school, as my bff suffers, we're both nerdy cheerleaders but we are still pretty popular.
| JVM-SP150 chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
You should use " not ' for dialogue, easier on the eyes to read.
Interesting little fuck-all to the usual depictions of Bebe - it's nice to see some variety in Bebe that doesn't concern her sexuality - but I wish your alternate interpretation of Wendy as a nobody could've interacted with your geeky Bebe. But alas, the geeky Bebe must co-exist with a traditional bitch!Wendy.
You also did a nice fuck-all to the nerdy Kyle by making him a star basketball player, which was another very interesting change.
| HappyNoddleGirl666 chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Interesting idea. I like the role-reversal here, people usually make Bebe the popular girl instead of Wendy.
Keep up the good work.