Reviews for Beginnings
Levi's Teacup chapter 3 . 2/25/2014
Not gonna lie.. I cried the whole time Jiro was getting gang banged XD you should write more. This one really got my pulse up and kept me in suspence:D
Guest chapter 3 . 7/30/2013
Awesome chapter! I really liked how you portrayed Jiro throughout- it is interesting to see what may have happened before they met Shu and Kluke and how Jiro became so cold. Can't wait for the next chapter!
MeltedIceAngel chapter 3 . 7/30/2013
Omg this is perf. I love it! Please update soon.
XxZolaxX chapter 2 . 10/23/2012
Your a really good writer! :"D This chapter was very well writen Your much better then I am,I say! XD You should really have more reviews! :)
And I can certainly see that you have good imagination . I suck at having a random idea pop in my head O.O It can take months!
I like how you described the town that Zola and Jiro were in. I can actually imagine it in my head as I continue reading!

Update when you feel like it! :"D
MeltedIceAngel chapter 2 . 10/8/2012
Great! I really loved this!

You seriously got that scene from the Outsiders? I was thinking of The Outsiders while reading it! XD

Honestly, this is just, flawless! It's so perfect, I mean I can even picture this happening unlike a lot of BD fanfictions I read. -

I can't wait until you update! (:
XxZolaxX chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
This is awesome! :"D I sorta had the same idea to do this but,I think your the perfect one that was MEANT to do this! XD Seriously,my imagination is not that big...;) I'll be stuck in front of the computer screen for hours when starting chapter 2! XD

Oh and by the way,thank you for the nice review for my 'Another Journey' fic :P
I sincerely(do we write it like that...? O.O) appreciate it :"D And yes, I should of had made Zola summon Killer Bat in the middle of that Italian restaurant! XD

Anyways! Update when you feel like it!
P.S. Little thanks to XZOLAX (It's my online friend! :D) for telling you to do this! :"DDDDD XD
MeltedIceAngel chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
OMG Amazing start!

Thank you sooo much for writing! I'm really, really excited to see how this turns out!

I wish I was as talented with writing as you. xD Can I have some of yours? XD JK.

Anywho... I really can't wait until you update! (:
AngelKeeve chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Awesome! Keep it up!