Reviews for The War of the Worlds
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
This story kept moving and kept my interest. I found too many descriptive words that most children wouldn't readily know or understand. There was no clear Beginning, Middle or End as a good story is supposed to have. There should have been some change made in the Main Character as a result of what he experienced. The ending was to weak and left me unsatisfied. If there were more attempts made to reach the goal (getting on the moon) I think this story could be developed into a memorable children's book. Keep at it
Heartless demon wolf chapter 9 . 10/27/2012
Huh...well Spike was not in this as much as I thought he would be and the other five did not appear at all...damn, I liked this but talk about having only one main...hmmm...
Heartless demon wolf chapter 8 . 10/27/2012
Oh shit...yeah, they are bucked...damn, well nothing not even peace last forever.
Heartless demon wolf chapter 7 . 10/27/2012
Evil alien bastards, but I just love how two goddesses don't even bother to appear until the last second, what the fuck?
Heartless demon wolf chapter 6 . 10/27/2012
Shit, talk about having nothing to hold you back from killing yourself, poor Twi.
Heartless demon wolf chapter 5 . 10/27/2012
Crazy bastards with their stupid plans to save all of a bad feeling about the next chapter, and what happened to everypony else?
Heartless demon wolf chapter 4 . 10/27/2012
Ummm...a few spelling amd grammer errors but nothing to major, I think you meant goddess though, since Celestia and Luna are goddesses but Discord is a god so...could he have been praying to Discord? Hmmm...I'm loving this.
Heartless demon wolf chapter 3 . 10/27/2012
Damn, she got seprated from Spike, never a good thing and Candence is a goddess, how can she lose against machines? This is getting crazy...I like it, hope Twi and Spike reunight soon.
Heartless demon wolf chapter 2 . 10/27/2012
Damn, everypony got smoked, talk about being bucked, shit...just ...REAL! Oh, and one slight error but it's minor.
Heartless demon wolf chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Huh, rather well made...I think I read this before though hmmmm...hoping it's a Spilight, will read more, good grammer and spelling, peace.