|Reviews for The Devil You Know|
| Helloboys25 chapter 41 . 3/12
I loved this! So beautifully written and remained true to the characters all the way through :) Thankyou!
| FiascoWay chapter 41 . 2/10
This story was really enjoyable, and you really nailed Lisbon's snarky one liners. The story tag about the cat who stayed after being fed was truly inspired!
| Teera chapter 21 . 2/6
Good story so far.
I like the way you seem to insert the word "green" so smartly in each and every one of your chapters (w)
| Lizline chapter 41 . 11/12/2014
It's such a good story, I keep reading it over and over again. :)
| MichaellaD chapter 41 . 10/29/2014
My Dad has worn wool socks literally his entire life, summer and winter. The hair has worn off his legs as a result to a point about six inches above his ankle. I'm kind of glad to know that there are other men with hairless patches on their legs.
| MichaellaD chapter 21 . 10/29/2014
I'm 19 years old and I've never heard of La Perla or a Red Box either. What's my excuse?
| MichaellaD chapter 15 . 10/29/2014
"They make them take an evil test when they're being vetted for office."
| MichaellaD chapter 12 . 10/29/2014
"Teresa beating him to death with a shampoo bottle. Less sexy."
| MichaellaD chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
I really like this description of Jane and Angela's relationship!
| et voila 1312 chapter 41 . 10/20/2014
mlee, I really liked this story; the premise, the pace, the action, everything. I've already reviewed the chapters leading up, so you have my previous comments (But I reread the whole thing to remember the high points).
I hate to say it, but I was disappointed with this last chap: it felt rushed, pushed through, like you were eager to finish it and move on (which you might have been). I felt like there was stuff left out: she doesn't decide right then to marry him, just says 'we'll see' (which is the classic parents' brush off), or say okay to them having a baby (tho she did go off birth control, guess we're to assume she does event. get pregnant). Does her family accept him (as member of their family)?
I was charmed by your "trick" with the ring; we're supposed to think it's an engag ring, but is in fact *his* ring, now engraved with *their* names, for her to wear around her neck. Different, but it works (and yes, it's practical;)). I guess the case with the dead fireman was the push for her to face/overcome her fears/insec about her father, and in turn, Patrick.
Not used to seeing Jane *begging*!
This was an excellent story, truly, I just thought the ending came too soon, was a little incomplete. (And I was surprised to see the accompanying pic had changed, was so used to seeing the flower:( )
| buddyfox0gmail chapter 16 . 10/13/2014
I love the remark...and then he says those five dreaded words. The banter between Liabon and Jane is perfect. You sure you're not Heller?
| juliasusino chapter 41 . 8/31/2014
ohhhh! Love It
follow the story is amazin i promise!
| storyweaver60 chapter 41 . 6/27/2014
I really enjoyed it. Keep writing.
| TamaraLDBrennan chapter 41 . 6/26/2014
Thanks for killing me with feels! Loved this from start to end!
| TamaraLDBrennan chapter 5 . 6/26/2014
Are you trying to kill me with feels?