Reviews for Cracks
CatInFrance chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
oh...that's wonderful. you're going to make me cry. Perfect. Perfect characterization. Beautiful. I love it.
Jess chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
I love this. Your characterisation is brilliant - any one of these scenes could have come straight from the books.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
I have to say this is probably the most IC depiction of Lan and Moiraine I've seen. I particularly like the call-backs to how they met and how she uses it to try and lighten Lan's moods. Like the others I would love to see more about these two from you. I'll take anything really. :P
elMoscato chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
couldn't agree more with the 1st review! I'd love to see more of this as well, it's a VERY GOOD piece!
Bob G. Leeman chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
an excellent sequence of vignettes that explores and even explains the complex relations that exist between two very complicated and private people - and in the present tense, at that! very well written and in-character, I like the remark about 'friendship' particularly. a bit short though, perhaps it could be expanded into a longer piece with the motivating factor of some kind of journey or quest included, their first visit to the Eye of the World, for example? WitL!