|Reviews for USTyle|
| yanera chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
hahhaahhah, lol, i was laughing at the end, that was cute
| Deliah chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
Why do you switch between POVs in the middle of your scenes? It's disorienting and makes everything seem very flat.
"the redhead," "the blond," "the Jew" "the raven haired man, etc." - nobody but bad fanfic writers uses epithets. Why not just say "he" or their name? It's a cheap way to make your prose seem "interesting" and very amateurish.
It's weird because I feel like you could be a good writer if you didn't try to ape the habits of bad fanfiction writers so much (and this includes bad porn...)
| jess chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
And Cartman's heart was broken when he found out... well i like to think so.
| Tawintap chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Lawl! xD This was great! :D Btw, I love the picture for the fic. Kyle looks so sweet and innocent... It took me like 5 minutes to observe the blood covered chainsaw... I was like:
| Fluweel chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
Ah, poor Kenny! Well, not really, as he got to enjoy the show :)
And thanks for explaining UST, didn't know what it meant ;)
| simply anonymous chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Stan makes such good decisions when he's drunk, lol! At least Kyle's not complaining...
| lil joker 1989 chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
I would have done the same thing if I was Kenny
| flaws-and-all chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
just great. you're great. dammit, this story is great. so cute and sexy and augh Stan was perrrfect. (Styles the OTP, hkjshfsefoih) GOOD JOB.
| Breathlessly chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Ugh, stop it you. You're gonna be the end of me.
Even though Kyman is my one and only, this was super cute. Maybe l, just maybe, Style...isn't...so bad..?
| ShexWasxGone chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Poor Kenny! lol I loved it!
| chickenjaegers chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
I can see Kenny doing that...great job too, you are a fabulous writer!
| symphknot chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Wow Villain i loved it...*O*
| fUCK THIS LITERALLY FUCK IT chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
That's Kenny for ya.
"You're having sex in my living room?! Oh, well. COOL!"
This made me lol
| Garu0212 chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
I love it, I knew it was not 'UST' but now if that makes sense n.n
| sad1st1c m1stress chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
I loved it