Reviews for Pandora's Wish
Rubai chapter 5 . 12/6/2013
Okay, I got this far before I wanted to flip a table. The concept is pretty good, but it is very confusing. It might be the errors in grammar or missing words, but I had to re-read some parts a few times to see if I read things correctly. The final straw was the whole thing about Toichi being Shinichi's younger brother, which makes no sense what so ever. You have already stated Toichi being Kaito's father and that Kaito and Shinichi were at least the same age mentally.

I really want to read more, but I just can't force myself to do so. I would suggest to re-read what you have and think about some of the connections you made.
CIAOOOO chapter 9 . 11/10/2013
please UPDATE! IT'S BEEN A YEAR!
twilightserius chapter 8 . 10/15/2012
damn now more idiots are after him. sigh seems that death loves shin like luck loves kai
namarifukurou chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
I think you use 'this' a little too much.
foreverandeveralone chapter 7 . 10/9/2012
Ah! I've always taken interest in supernatural abilities! Awesome!
foreverandeveralone chapter 6 . 10/5/2012
More moments! More kisses! Yay!
Though Shinichi is still unstable...
Guest chapter 6 . 10/5/2012
The story is interesting, but very hard to read. You have lots of missing words and some sentences don't make sense.
foreverandeveralone chapter 5 . 9/30/2012
I just love the final part! The way Kaito tended to Shinichi's wounds and Shinichi just watched him with pure curiosity is just awesome!
And they KISSED! OMG OMG! And the kiss is too sweet!
But is Shinichi normal? I hope he is... I want this kiss to be due to Shinichi's actual feeling for Kaito!
foreverandeveralone chapter 4 . 9/27/2012
Woh... That was... Hope Conan is ok...
foreverandeveralone chapter 3 . 9/25/2012
Wow! You update really fast!
I like it, especially the way you describe that Conan is capable of performing magic tricks!
Ah, if only Conan were the full-grown Shinichi...
MyNameIsWren chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
So I'm gonna try to solve the riddle.
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I am the gem called Pandora,
And this is my wish.
I hide within another,
But is revealed under the moonlight,
As my true color is blood.
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I am spade, cover, diamond, and heart,
Since the Dove and Raven are apart.
My vessels are K S., K.K. K. U., and K. B.,
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(OK so Spade Shinichi and Clover Kaito, I don't know who K.U. or K.B. are but I have a feeling that it involves Hakuba and Heji.)
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Until the 10,000 year of the Volley Comet,
Comes to begin the reunion of one.
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Lupin and Holmes are key,
For the secrets they hide.
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(Lupin and Holmes are either referring to Kaito and Shinichi or to the two Crows)
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Black Feather Kite is the Magician,
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(Kuroba Black Father; Kaito Kite)
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Driving Force New One is the Detective,
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(Kudou Driving Force; ShinichiNew one)
Yet the Dove and Raven is protected by the Egos.

I am the Pandora Gem,
My wish is the Kaitou's and Meitantei's truth.
I grant immortality from tears,
That justice cannot touch.
Can you find me in plain sight?
foreverandeveralone chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
Cool! Kaito is going to reveal himself to Shinichi! And they're going to stay together!
It seems a little bit more KaiShin to me... Can you make a mixture of both KaiShin and ShinKai?
foreverandeveralone chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
I really like the idea!
And there will be both KaiShin and ShinKai! Yay! Exactly my type!
But if KS is Kudo Shinichi and KK is Kuroba Kiaito then who is K.U. and K.B?
Really excited!