Reviews for The Cullen Enterprise
Deedlez01 chapter 6 . 9/26/2012
Who's not loving this story? You point them my way and I'll deal with them!

I love the honesty of Edward in this one. He's not trying to make it something it's not. He wants a relationship without all the hassle, she needs the money. It's a win-win situation for both of them. Although how long it will stay that way is anyones guess (except yours of course).

Keep it up, can't wait for more.
Arowley chapter 6 . 9/26/2012
cant wait for bellas answer
eyes 4 edward only chapter 6 . 9/26/2012
Well I love it so keep with it and see ya laters.
rubell chapter 6 . 9/26/2012
are you seriously getting complainers already? those people need to stick to T rated fics...or if this is their 'dirty little secret' fic, just not review!
Arowley chapter 5 . 9/26/2012
i love it i almost wish for longer chapters so i can read more the quick updates are great i love it good job i cant wait for bellas answer and things to get juicy
mountainlion718 chapter 6 . 9/26/2012
good to see his POV, i'm sticking with you and this story :)
Clancy67 chapter 6 . 9/26/2012
Love it! No flouncing here, I'm in for the long haul. Can't wait to see how this story unfolds. Thanks for sharing your story!
eyes 4 edward only chapter 5 . 9/26/2012
Hell no to unfollowing after that. You just pulled my pervy mind in.
Stickybuns chapter 6 . 9/26/2012
When he told her about his other proposition, I thought she'd tell him to take a hike! But the way he presented it... not so much as a creeper but more like a lonely (hot as hell) man... I gotta say, you had me intrigued.

That's a lie. I was intrigued WAY before that. lol

Can't wait for more!
Amelia Bedelia chapter 5 . 9/26/2012
I was going to tell you about how I was HOPING Edward would ask for Bella to be a live-in girlfriend, but the previous chapters, I started wondering if Edward was too nice of a guy to ask that... so I'm very pleased that Edward's a good guy trying to get in Bella's pants! So he'll go about it... politely, I suppose. :D

And now I see there's another chapter... Woo-hoo!

Yours truly,
Amelia Bedelia
lisamichelle17 chapter 6 . 9/26/2012
I did like this EPOV. It was needed and he doesn't come off as an asshole. He has a heart but his priorities is on his job. He cares about his company. I'm excited to see what happens next. I really am excited at how and if Bella will accept his offer. Thank you for writing.
PinkSlytherin chapter 6 . 9/26/2012
Love love love Edwards pov! I just love this story in general!
SandytheSandstorm chapter 6 . 9/26/2012
I already loved the idea, only heard of this in the movie Indecent Proposal with married Demi Moore and Woody Harrelson? in Vegas, on a yacht where is Demi is wined and dined for a million dollars if she spends one night with billionaire Robert Redford
HollBeth chapter 6 . 9/26/2012
The dumping reminded me of Edward in Pretty Woman - love it!
tennesseelamb chapter 6 . 9/26/2012
Because I will read whatever you write!
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