Reviews for The Cullen Enterprise
blueeyes11354 chapter 7 . 9/27/2012
I appreciate the open honesty. He makes it so easy to accept. ;)
smilingchrissy chapter 7 . 9/27/2012
I love this story so it possible if you can make the chapters longer, if not then thats ok...still love the story
ThiglDub chapter 7 . 9/27/2012
I like rhe little Q & A in your notes. I have a question... can you give this guy my phone number? ;-)

Thanks for this fun story, it is really fun to read!
pmk kelly chapter 7 . 9/27/2012
Loved it
beachlovers chapter 7 . 9/27/2012
Thank you so much to those banner makers!
Keyplanner chapter 7 . 9/27/2012
LOVE this story! THANK YOU!
Hushi Taloa chapter 7 . 9/27/2012
O!M!G! This chapter made me laugh and laugh again! Favorite lines:

"Maybe it [prostitution] didn't seem so horrific when the potential client was gorgeous and nice and smelled really good."

"There was no way I could pull off the whole sex strumpet thing... I would be terrible, and I really didn't think I'd survive the mortification of being fired from sex slavery."

"'Okay, well, are you going to want me to do anything weird? ...Nipple clamps freak me out.' I asked awkwardly."

"Twenty. Five. Thousand. Dollars... That kind of money could pay for live-in care for Charlie while I was gone. I could hire him a freaking housekeeper. I could get a new car that didn't go through gas like it was water. And I could have sex with Edward Cullen!"

Who knew there were so many giggles in prostitution?!

And what's the BS about you "fail at angst"? Excuse ME? Did you delete Bonne Foi or Madman's Mercy from your brain, woman? Seriously!

Hey, we'll not complain about the two-chapters-for-two-days gift; we'll just accept with exuberant joy! Thank you for writing for us!
tiffyboocullenjonas chapter 7 . 9/27/2012
Wow that was great loved it
mountainlion718 chapter 7 . 9/27/2012
Well...Charlie gave her an out...good luck to her
Jennmc75 chapter 7 . 9/27/2012
Holy crap. $25,000 a month is unfathomable to someone who doesn't even make that in a year's time. I think that would make anyone in Bella's position seriously consider this proposal.

I love how you have made Charlie more observant than Bella thinks.
CassandraLowery chapter 7 . 9/27/2012
Wow, thanks for a second chapter today! Of course we knew that Bella would take Edward up on the deal...should be intriguing!

You spoil us. :)

Cassandra :)
sarahmichellew chapter 7 . 9/27/2012
Thanks :)
ann sheffield chapter 7 . 9/27/2012
this is so good - I love how quick its moving ahead and I love all the thought Bella is giving this. I read a lot of the comments to yesterday's chapters and some people were kind of indignant to the whole 'prostitution' angle but what it really comes down to is that Bella foremostly is attracted to Edward and that's why she's going to do it. I don't think if Mike Newton was rich and offered the same deal she'd take it even if it would make her and Charlie's life more comfortable.
slc6548 chapter 7 . 9/27/2012
Sweet - gotta love the fantasy world!
jedigirlsc chapter 7 . 9/27/2012
"I really didn't think I'd survive the mortification of being fired from sex slavery."
hahahaha that was hilarious!

loved the art banner too!
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