|Reviews for The Cullen Enterprise|
| KNG1986 chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
I'm hooked on this already and I can't wait for them to meet.
| robertnkristen chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
love this story..is this Edward as innoncent as he sounds? LOL either way, i can't wait for them to meet face to face !
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
Such a promising beginning. As someone who lost her one remaining parent to cancer at the age of seventeen, I am already deeply emotionally invested. You have me totally hooked.
| karolkid chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
| yana0808 chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
| lisamichelle17 chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
I continue to love the father/daughter relationship between Charlie and Bella. She loves him so much and is so self sacrificing her own life to keep him on the path of recovery. In this chapter, you introduced us to Edward and my god he has so much compassion for Bella. I loved how he was there for her while she cried. I also learned that he is 28. I used to live in a small town so I know a lot about gossip. Meeting in Port Angeles for dinner is perfect. I am so excited to see where you go. Thank you for writing.
| Medea Ariadne DeMarchi chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
I can't wait till they meet in person; and I'm looking forward to see where you take this story.
| Medea Ariadne DeMarchi chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
The story sounds promising.
I can completely understand the "I can't help myself" feeling. I'm a Gemini too so I'm constantly being distracted by several story ideas. One of my former teachers once said that Gemini's have split personalities, it so happens that I don't agree.
| Emmaline chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
This is hard...the anticipation is agonizing waiting for
the next chapter! I know, imagine how hard this is for
Bella...well, it IS a story! And you know exactly
where you're taking it, and we don't. That's where the
'agonizing' comes in. More please and soon? :)
| Babyface Carter chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
I'm very excited to read your next chapter :) Loved how the phone rang not long after Bella sent her response via email!
It is a sad subject matter though - cancer sucks big time!
| laylak500 chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
I am a Gemini as well, no wonder I feel so connected to you. Anyway, loving the new story.
| Jwo38 chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
Awwww, I love caring Edward. Excited to see where you take us with this story. :-)
| pnkats chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
So next chapter they meet?! Can't wait!
| melfin80 chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
I am so intrigued. Can't wait for the story to unfold.
| KL93 chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
O.o she still has no sense of self preservation. lol