Reviews for The Cullen Enterprise
tulips3 chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
Looking forward to their meeting.
latuacantante4him chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
I'm stuck on Edward Cullen shirtless! :)
MDtwiwriter chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
Can't wait to see her thoughts on Edward.
Holidai chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
I posted for Chapter 2 but I don't know if it took, I wasn't logged in and when I did it did not show, so I'll post both here...

Chapter 1:
I am very intrigued by Edward. He seems very polite - if not a little formal. Bella seems to be reaching the end of her rope though, so it seems a good thing that his offer has come. I am quite curious as to what it will be exactly...

Chapter 2:
Edward seems very kind-hearted, I hope he turns out to be the same in person. I look forward to what comes next...
Guest chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
Edward seems very kind-hearted, I hope he turns out to be the same in person. I look forward to what comes next...
blueeyes11354 chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
It is so sad how expensive medical care is in this country. Le sigh.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
After the second chapte I am hooked! Loving it so far can't way to see where you take these two on this journey! Can't wait for the next chapter...keep up the great work.
Shamatt0403 chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
I can imagine how just being offered help when you feel like you are sinking could just be emotionally overwhelming. I could almost hear "I feel very protective of you" whispering in his head. Great chapter!
Xavier2163 chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
Ok, I'm assuming all human if Edward is twenty-eight and his mother died of cancer five years ago.

All kinds of red flags should be going off for Bella if he wants a face to face meeting after one phone call. If he's honest about wanting to help, he should do something to actually help to prove he's legit before she should agree to meet him. In a real situation like this, it stills sounds awfully fishy that someone you met online wants a face to face meeting after one email and one phone call. Even if she googles him and knows it's really him, there's nothing that says rich people can't be dangerous.

If she goes through with meeting him, it should be a public place where people know her, and she shouldn't go alone. I dinner invitation sounds both private and alone, plus she already said she doesn't want people from Forks to know she's meeting him. All a recipe for disaster.

I'm not saying anything bad will happen to her in the story, but in a real world setting, she should be much more careful.

Looking forward to reading more. Please post when you have the time.
Jocelynlynn chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
Great chapter! Can't wait or next chapter! Awesome writing!
Courtney37 chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
Ooh he called her! And she's allowing him to help her. She definitely needs someone's help. Can't wait to read more. Thanks again.
Kate Monster chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
this is a really interesting start to a story. Hope you continue to update regularly.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
Poor Bella. I'm curious to see what the offer is.
LIZZIED1951 chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
I'm REALLY intrigued, now! Can't wait for the next update...
polyphany chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
I Love it!
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