Reviews for The Cullen Enterprise
jdc0630 chapter 25 . 5/21/2016
Oh God, please tell me your going to finish this. An HEA would be greatly appreciated for these two...
they have both been thru so much.
I really am enjoying your story & would love to see an ending to this...please let me know when
& if your going to finish it...please.

Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
jk chapter 24 . 5/20/2016
why do you always have Edward talk about being lonely?

the whores had THREE long relationships in the last FOUR years!
how in the actual fuck is he lonely?
jk chapter 23 . 5/20/2016
I'm fucking confused...what the fuck does bellas "trust" in Edward have to do with going without a condom?
I trust you...to know that irina didn't cheat on you and give you aids?

that makes nooooo fucking sense!
bellas a fucking moron
jk chapter 22 . 5/20/2016
OMG OMG OMG
A WHOLE CHAPTER ABOUT...SHOPPING!
are you fucking serious with this bullshit?
jk chapter 20 . 5/20/2016
could you have made bella anymore pathetic and transparent when you had her asking about alice?
stuuuuuupid
like the fucking paid whore as any right to be jealous
jk chapter 17 . 5/20/2016
hes so glad he isn't alone? whatever hes been alone fro 2 fuckin weeks...booo hooo
and hes ony been alone for a few months inbetween each year long fucking relationship...this boy doesn't know shit about being alone!

Carmen said shes been there 4 years and has seen each of Edwards 3 one year long relationships...
jk chapter 16 . 5/20/2016
soooo you thought it was a good idea to have the last three of Edwards girlfriends to be the denali whores? THE 3 FUCKING SISTERS FROM TWILIGHT?
that's just mother fucking gross!
Not only are they that grossest used up skanks...hello a thousand years old...and succubus's...succubus is not a name for a siren...its another word for whore! but all three sisters? I'm guessing in youuuuur story their not sisters right? ohhh how creative of you
jk chapter 6 . 5/20/2016
I'm fucking bothered that Edward is ready to ask a girl to have sex with him for money because he has "needs" after only being alone for 2 weeks

and irina really? and if Edward attracts golddiggers they would stick around even if he was working all the time...so that doesn't make any sense!
quinzy chapter 25 . 4/20/2016
wow, I need and update! I don't know why you suddenly disappeared but I hope you're fine and it's just a case o writer's block that you left :(
aniseed flower chapter 24 . 4/10/2016
Hi! I hope your doing well. It seems you have moved on from fanfiction? Or a multi year case of the blahness.. Lol. Just wanted to say i really like this story, and its a shame it didnt get finished. But I hope your having a great life! Real life is so much better when youre out living it. :o) happy 2016 if you do get this. Lol.
squalloogal chapter 25 . 4/1/2016
Hope you come back to update this lovely xox
reachrathi chapter 25 . 3/27/2016
Awwww...that was a very nice missing.
FireFlower77 chapter 1 . 3/23/2016
Just started to read your story. Looks promising, like everything you write . Though I have to say, it's not your writing, cause I love it. This sort of story with the heroic female lead (who is, most times, beautiful, young and thin) being in economic trouble and finding, in this case, a very "Cullenesque" hero, who happens to be o so handsome and good... Being in a worse position that your Bella now, and with no chance of finding even the creepy not so handsome 'copycat' of your Edward... *sigh* Probably that's why these stories are so appealing, cause usually the readers are older, with x number of pounds on them and not so lucky in the looks department... Lets face it... in the RW... who is lucky to find their own Edwards or Bellas...
EmmaHope070115 chapter 25 . 3/1/2016
I really hope you continue to write this story, I couldn't put it down
I'llbethereforyou1234 chapter 12 . 2/20/2016
omfg I live in Kansas too, I live in Topeka maybe we could write something together, ene though I doubt I can write as good as you, I'll pm you a sample
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