|Reviews for The Cullen Enterprise|
| jdc0630 chapter 25 . 5/21/2016
Oh God, please tell me your going to finish this. An HEA would be greatly appreciated for these two...
they have both been thru so much.
I really am enjoying your story & would love to see an ending to this...please let me know when
& if your going to finish it...please.
Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
| jk chapter 24 . 5/20/2016
why do you always have Edward talk about being lonely?
the whores had THREE long relationships in the last FOUR years!
how in the actual fuck is he lonely?
| jk chapter 23 . 5/20/2016
I'm fucking confused...what the fuck does bellas "trust" in Edward have to do with going without a condom?
I trust you...to know that irina didn't cheat on you and give you aids?
that makes nooooo fucking sense!
bellas a fucking moron
| jk chapter 22 . 5/20/2016
OMG OMG OMG
A WHOLE CHAPTER ABOUT...SHOPPING!
are you fucking serious with this bullshit?
| jk chapter 20 . 5/20/2016
could you have made bella anymore pathetic and transparent when you had her asking about alice?
like the fucking paid whore as any right to be jealous
| jk chapter 17 . 5/20/2016
hes so glad he isn't alone? whatever hes been alone fro 2 fuckin weeks...booo hooo
and hes ony been alone for a few months inbetween each year long fucking relationship...this boy doesn't know shit about being alone!
Carmen said shes been there 4 years and has seen each of Edwards 3 one year long relationships...
| jk chapter 16 . 5/20/2016
soooo you thought it was a good idea to have the last three of Edwards girlfriends to be the denali whores? THE 3 FUCKING SISTERS FROM TWILIGHT?
that's just mother fucking gross!
Not only are they that grossest used up skanks...hello a thousand years old...and succubus's...succubus is not a name for a siren...its another word for whore! but all three sisters? I'm guessing in youuuuur story their not sisters right? ohhh how creative of you
| jk chapter 6 . 5/20/2016
I'm fucking bothered that Edward is ready to ask a girl to have sex with him for money because he has "needs" after only being alone for 2 weeks
and irina really? and if Edward attracts golddiggers they would stick around even if he was working all the time...so that doesn't make any sense!
| quinzy chapter 25 . 4/20/2016
wow, I need and update! I don't know why you suddenly disappeared but I hope you're fine and it's just a case o writer's block that you left :(
| aniseed flower chapter 24 . 4/10/2016
Hi! I hope your doing well. It seems you have moved on from fanfiction? Or a multi year case of the blahness.. Lol. Just wanted to say i really like this story, and its a shame it didnt get finished. But I hope your having a great life! Real life is so much better when youre out living it. :o) happy 2016 if you do get this. Lol.
| squalloogal chapter 25 . 4/1/2016
Hope you come back to update this lovely xox
| reachrathi chapter 25 . 3/27/2016
Awwww...that was a very nice missing.
| FireFlower77 chapter 1 . 3/23/2016
Just started to read your story. Looks promising, like everything you write . Though I have to say, it's not your writing, cause I love it. This sort of story with the heroic female lead (who is, most times, beautiful, young and thin) being in economic trouble and finding, in this case, a very "Cullenesque" hero, who happens to be o so handsome and good... Being in a worse position that your Bella now, and with no chance of finding even the creepy not so handsome 'copycat' of your Edward... *sigh* Probably that's why these stories are so appealing, cause usually the readers are older, with x number of pounds on them and not so lucky in the looks department... Lets face it... in the RW... who is lucky to find their own Edwards or Bellas...
| EmmaHope070115 chapter 25 . 3/1/2016
I really hope you continue to write this story, I couldn't put it down
| I'llbethereforyou1234 chapter 12 . 2/20/2016
omfg I live in Kansas too, I live in Topeka maybe we could write something together, ene though I doubt I can write as good as you, I'll pm you a sample