Reviews for The First Marvel
dark dhampir chapter 2 . 11/30/2015
PLEASE CONTINUE! The more I read about Captain Marvel, the more I like him, and I think this is a great idea. I like the camaraderie with Thor and Hulk, and I get the impression that he could be good friends with Wasp (they seem to have similar personalities). I wish this would continue.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
yes please continue I would love to see how this story ends
Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
this is kid of cute I would like to see where you are going with this
cybresamurai chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
I love this story
He Who See's chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Whoa! Somebody ACTUALLY made a fanfic where Captain Marvel appears AND is a main character!? STOP THE PRESSES HERE I'M SO EXCITED :D

This tale be dope meh nizzle! If you don't go and continue it, then I know I'll be sorely disappointed in the world.
Jostanos chapter 2 . 9/24/2012
YOU PASS!
FLAWLESS VICTORY! _
ShinobiTwin05 chapter 2 . 9/24/2012
So Captain Marvel replaced Captain America...? Aaaawwwww... that's too bad. :(
kyugan chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
Okay, Amorra's brought in the Black Sheep of the Marvel Family, this can only get better.

Will Black Adam remain a bad guy, or will he become a sort of mentor to Billy when he learns just who the real Captain Marvel is?
kyugan chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
lol, Hulk made a new friend.
How will the Big Red Cheese (I'm not kidding, that's his nickname) fare with the other Avengers? And will some of Cap's villains show up to stir up trouble?
Jostanos chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
YOU PASS!
FLAWLESS VICTORY! _

Matsuo: I don't think they do, Captain Marvel..
Oliver: But we do! _